Chapter 1: This was beautifully written. The way you wrote it just conveyed the emotions so well that as a reader I could feel Yoongi's pain. The ending was good as well. It kind of leaves off with some hope that he will get better, rather than wrapping it up on a note that makes it feel like telling Namjoon was a magic fix it all solution.

Chapter 1: I thought I read this somewhere beside in aff, is that you?
btw, I really want to leave a comment, said that I really like this. Simple but somehow made me feel emphaty, also feel heart-warm with other members caring towards Yoongi. Good job :)

Chapter 1: This was so well written! :)

Chapter 1: NO! Don't you dare say the ending was y, I loved the ending so so so much! I know that this isn't really the whole point of the story, but I liked how you portrayed Jimin at the end, because that's how I always see him. Like he says the most simple things and doesn't realise how important and heartfelt they are and how much they really mean to everyone else. You're a very talented writer and this is one of my favourite stories of all time, even if it is just a oneshot.

Chapter 1: Just- ugh.. This was so perfect. It was wonderfully written and the storyline was well-thought of. Although, I was confused at first, but other than that, it was beautiful.

Chapter 1: The ending was so sad and good. This was really well written, good job

Chapter 1: That was really emotional