Fifteen

Achilie's Heel

GUYS! I am so sorry! I tried to update but apparently   somehow my computer got a virus and so it took like a month to fix.

Also I dropped my phone which completely broke. NOW I HAVE TO BUY A NEW ONE. :(

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Myungsoo's POV

I woke up in the morning from a call from.........

SUZY!!!

I quickly got up from my bed and answered her phone call.

"OPPA! I need your help, I fell in love with a guy and I need to make sure he likes me."

My heart sunk, how can I be so gullible to think that she likes me.

She told me the address and I walked to the location where she promised to meet me.

I walked passed the ice-cream store and found Suzy on her phone.

"Hi." I said awkwardly.

She stared at me with a blank expression.

I would have punched myself if I was alone.

Why the heck did I say Hi! I could have said something much better!!!

She smiled and I sat next to her.

Then she smiled and whispered next to my ear, "Oppa I was thinking and realized that the person that I liked was actually you."

I stared at her and coughed.

"I-I'm dating someone." I regretted saying that.

I would rather take Suzy than Jiyeon, who wouldn't!?

Then she came nearer  "I could take her away from you."

I smirked, "Try."

Then right after that word her lips touched mine and I thought my heart would explode.

I closed my eyes but opened them when I felt someone staring at us.

Then I saw Jiyeon running and crying, and who is that ugly child?

"There is the ugly squad." 

I turned my head to Suzy who sad that.

"I guess you're mine now, Bye Myungsoo!"

Then she left with a kiss on my cheek.

I thought my heart would explode from happiness but I realized, it exploded from regret.

I was walking back home when I saw a man and woman holding hands and talking sweetly.

I smiled, I have never done that to Jiyeon have I?

I felt guilty for not making her happy and never having true feelings for her.

"Please meet someone better than me."

I walked some more when I reached in front of Jiyeon's house.

I gently laughed, why did I come here?

I thought about it again, maybe my heart is telling me to apologize.

I walked up the front step and knocked on her door.

I heard no answer.

I looked through the side wondows and I saw Jiyeon's coat that she wore 45 minutes ago.

I looked more closely and I saw something that looked like a..... pill bottle.

I quickly looked around the flower pots fro the door key but there was none.

I paced around the front door, and I lifted up the welcome mat.

To my suprise, there was actually a door key.

In seconds I was in the house but I didn't know where Jiyeon was.

I looked all over the place, then I saw a room.

I opened it, it was really small compared to the master bedroom.

It was the size of her dad's workroom.

I looked around her room and I saw her on the bed and I saw her groaning.

I quickly went up to her to check if she was badely affected by the pills.

I shook her multiple times and called her name but there was no answer.

I shook her again and she sputtered out a few words, " You -- liar, I---loved-------you."

 Tears dropped from her eyes to the bed.

I picked her up bridal style and headed to the front door when a saw a man in the front steps.

"What are you doing here!" He shouted.

Tears started to form on the tip of my eyes as they dropped, "She-- she-- needs to head to the hospital!" I shouted back.

"Calm down. Just leave her here, and I will take care of it since I'm her dad."

I handed Jiyeon to him and I thanked him as I headed back outside.

I was walking back home when I heard a loud bang and it wasn't a sound from a gun but it was a sound made by a human.

I recalled a memory, then it came to me.

The clinic scene, her father abuses her.

I sprinted to her house and banged on the door.

I heard multiple digusted sounds from inside the house.

I kept banging on the door but her father won't open it.

Tears dropped as I finally got the confidence to say "I love you." 

 

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TaecZy-MyungYeon
#1
Chapter 28: Omg :c this is sad but cute too :c update soon please
Lianasaur
#2
Chapter 26: update v_v been waiting for an update for a long time
Sulsashaff #3
A new reader here...hope to love it
moon_babydino #4
Chapter 1: Oh my god? She got by her father...that ! I hate this kind of abnormal thing. Anyway i wonder what kind of way myung will fall to her.excited lol.
Claire17
#5
Chapter 23: ahh now I know why Jiyeon father hates Jiyeon so much :(
how sad :(
can't wait, please update soon author-nim... :)
Claire17
#6
Chapter 22: woah getting interesting :D
Jiyeon father still alive? what the!
can't wait please update soon author-nim:D
Subsonic
#7
Chapter 21: Her father is still out there though.. I hope the police will catch him soon! And poor Chanyeol and Jiyeon :(
Subsonic
#8
Chapter 20: Glad that Suzy is gone. Where the heck is Chanyeol anyway? I mean, your sister is in the hospital, what the hell are you doing, not even visiting her? Glad Jiyeon forgave Myungsoo btw.
Madelynol203 #9
Chapter 17: I'm sorry if I'm being rude but do you not know what to do with this story or is there a problem? Bc I can't wait anymore XD it's just so good and you haven't been updating but I see you logged in today probably just to read stories but didn't write anything for your fanfic :( Any way hope you write one soon !FIGHTING AUTHORNIM!<3 ;)
Claire17
#10
Chapter 19: Oh My God I hope Jiyeonnie get well soon...:O
can't wait, please update soon author-nim..:)