Title : (10/10)

Perfect! The title is one of a kind;rare and it also fits the story perfectly. It also catches the readers' attention and lures them to the story,well since it has a perfect score,there ain't much to say about it :D

Description&Foreword : (10/10)

Well the description is perfect,honestly! But I guess you can move the character chart and the authors' note in the foreword,since pretty much most people do that. AND,your description is not too long,not to short,it's just right and it also makes the readers one to read more. I also like how you put the meaning of the word 'acrimony',it's special and somehow :D 

Grammar&Language :  (19/20)

NO SPELLING MISTAKES OR WHATSOEVER. Haha. But there are a few mistakes,they're probably careless mistakes and I guess if you were to spot them you'd correct them. Anyhows,since your careless mistakes are the only thing that I can talk about in this section,i'm just gonna point out those mistakes(you're a dang good writer alright).

In the 3rd paragraph, "Feeling the adrenaline rush through her veins." Ya mispelled the veins xD I guess that's not intentional though,because I do get mistakes like this and I have to constantly proofread my stories,haha.

Oh yeah! There is one part I don't understand,please don't mind me,LOL. In the 6th paragraph, "Ahri rubbed her cheeks against the male's aching ." Cheeks literally meant cheeks right ._. I hope I'm not wrong xD So maybe you could add something in front,so that those who couldn't understand English well will not misunderstand? xD Sorry,haha.

"Ahri crouched down and rubbed her cheeks against the male's aching ." Maybe something like this? You can change the crouch down into something different if you want to,maybe 'bend down'? :D

The wills that Ahri's grandfather made...um how should I say it? I'm not offending you or anything,but I guess numbers look kind of better spelled out and I found tinyyyyyyy mistake in Ahri's will.

"May I give my youngest granddaughter,Yoon Ahri,to own a company of fashion designing. I will give her a quarter of YOON Enterprise's fortune." I guess it's something like that,don't worry! If you don't like to spell the fraction or numbers,then it's okay,i'm just making a suggestion :3

Character : (20/20)

The characters are perfect,I just love em'! You elaborated their personalities excellently and I guess it probably just made the reader understand the two main characters very well(I just repeated myself,didn't I? LOL). I like how you made Ahri into a but also a somehow fillial granddaughter because most of the time when writers write about s,they'll make them hate their family or so. It's just sweet that Ahri has a somehow,two sided personality.

As for Myungsoo,he also has a 2 sided personality,which is basically really different. One moment he's a cold bastard and the next he can be kind as an angel(or what I think he is),but that is actually cool. But there is something that I don't really understand well about him,I'll mention that in the 'Flow of story' section,but in other words,it's just amazing :D

Flow of story : (9/10)

I'm so so so so soooo sorry about the missing 1 point,because it was suppose to be perfecttttt,BUT,I don't somehow understand how Myungsoo became so nice to Ahri,that fast. I mean,isn't he a cold bastard that likes to and stuff? But I guess this is where the other part of his personality comes in,but it's kind of like...to sudden,ya know? Even though Ahri feels like they were somehow connected,after scolding him a bastard,EVEN if she needed someone to talk to at the moment,how can she give in to Myungsoo on like telling her feelings,or something,that fast(okay I sound like an here,but sorry )':). But on the bright side,your story was still perfect so those one point,just split it in half on how I don't understand Myungsoo and how I don't understand Ahri,LOL SORREH.

Originality&Storyline : (10/10)

I honestly seen angst and sad romance before,the meeting was probably a comman type too,but what i've never seen before is how you made the main OC a in the beginning but also a fillial granddaughter to her deceased grandfather(like what I said in the character section),so 10 points to you! Sorry haha,I don't really have much to say here,cause it's just too perfect. I honestly thought this was a three shots until I didn't see the complete sign,i'll be waiting for you story's continuation(if that's even a word,LOL.) ^^

Overall : (78/80)

/whistles/ That's a nice score there,I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY YOU NEEDED REVIEWING ;_; It's like a diamond in the rough,kind of. But overall,I enjoyed the first 3 chapters dearly,AND I'LL BE SUBSCRIBING TO IT,hehe. And honestly,I enjoy reviewing your story,haha! Remember to comment once you've credited my shop so that I can cancel your name,one again,thank you for requesting at KMS&HMH Review Shop! Have a nice day,ta-ta~