The Begining of a Ripe Love

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sehun and luhan are lovers but the worst happenes. sehun gets arrested

Foreword

i worked very hard on this. it took me abut half an hour

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Selu #1
Chapter 4: Im lauhging so muhc seriousyl graet eport man! I laugh truugh the srtoy, cant wiat netx updte
lololololol #2
Chapter 4: Im looking forward to the next chapter!!!! So exciting, poor spunky :(
lololololol #3
Wow I really liked the first chapter! Luhan and sehuns love for eachother is so strong! Wow. Keep it up! 10/10
babymichiie #4
Chapter 1: Okay. Comment on Chapter 1. Overall, the storyline was messy.. for me. I can't seem to understand the flow of the story. But that's okay. Try harder! Hoping for a greater Chapter 2.

Good job so far! Keep it up! :)
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