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A dystopian future where the world is ruined by war and creatures called Banes roam the night. Kangnam and 5Zic find themselves in the middle of this world with only each other and a disease that could end everything for them. Companion to Out of Place. Written in a series of drabbles. 

Foreword

I finally finished writing this! Took me longer than I expected because I ended up writing more than I expected. Yeah, 11,000 words is nothing to scoff at. My only regret is the ending, since it seems to come out of nowhere. I kind of ran out of ideas and figured it needed something to tie it together. There's also another short extra to this, but I'm not too sure I like it or not, so it won't be included as of this moment. Later on I might change my mind. 

Again, I want to thank blacktulip, and parachutes, and hope they both thoroughly enjoy the story :D

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parachutes #1
Chapter 1: Ok first of all, do you write as a profession or something? Because this is BEAUTIFUL. It is ridiculous how 11,000 words can evoke such emotions from one person. It was that amazing. Just sayin'.

So yes, I really did enjoy this because as you know, I was dying to find out more about this world. Everything was so beautifully tragic. I loved that you included their history and how they came to be. And how you described the dystopian world and the banes... you painted this vivid image in my head that probably belongs in a movie, seriously. I'm sad Kangnam had to go in the end, but at least 5zic was there with him until the end. Thank you so much for writing this! I'm sure it took a lot out of you, but it was worth every single word. If you ever want to share the short extra, I would be so honored to read it!
blacktulip #2
Chapter 1: I'm feeling bittersweet and somehwat depressed by this story. I'm glad that there's a better life after all those war and banes and everything but I'm sad that everything is too late for kangnam. :(

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this though! I love the back story, the history behind the creation of banes, the story of where kangnam and 5zic came from, and also how you emphasized that kangnam's native is different from 5zic. I found that it's really endearing, despite the heavy atmosphere around the whole story. Thank you for writing this sequel, I'm glad that I requested this pairing from you because what I got in return is gold. :)
TecnoDark #3
Chapter 1: It's so sad but I love it (I'm crying0. Could you possibly make a spin-off that Kangnam does survive and they live together happily? Even if its short.
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