Chapter 9: whoa beautiful :'( well done, well done *claps*

Chapter 9: this is so great omfg

Chapter 9: this is so great omfg

Chapter 9: this is amazing.

Chapter 9: Omona this is so beautiful. I love it.

Chapter 9: I have goosebump! this is amazing!!!!!! idk what to say anymore, too much feels♡♡♡♡♡♡

Chapter 2: still in chapter 1 and I'm laughing so hard!!! good job :D

Chapter 9: Awww this was written so well~ and I mean in the literature sense, like the way the drinks and the paintings all held a sort of symbolism in Kae's life that showed me things about her that you didn't write directly.
I'm also glad I read the other one you wrote first because I would have surely been confused if I hadn't xD