Story: Unequivocal
Author: katakatica
Status: Ongoing- 22 Chapters
Characters: Jiyong - Seunghyun - Bigbang
Rated?: No
Summary: 
Seunghyun is a beast until he finds the boy who can calm him down.

I ONLY REVIEWED UNTIL CHAPTER 5 -- explaination could be found below and sorry!

Title:

I am completely, irrevocably in love with the title! It’s so intriguing. Truthfully, when I saw your request and read your story title, my interest perked up and I was already captivated. I was raring to go check it out. That, of course, is an exceptionally pleasant aspect. It wasn’t because it was an unusual word that I was intrigued but mostly because of the meaning of it.

Another plus because it’s a one word title (If you read my past reviews, you’ll probably know I have a thing for one word titles).

 

Foreword:

It was a pretty good foreword but I didn’t see (or read) anything that would etch in my mind. I was looking for the same pull that your title gave me but I didn’t see anything that was as strong as the title. Although, I did wonder why the mate unexpectedly choked with an unexplained reason.

I don’t know why, but some sentences are pretty awkward to read as well. But maybe, it was because you utilized ‘it’ to point out the mate. I think it would’ve been more pertinent if you used ‘him’ or other pronouns that will relate to a person. If it’s done on purpose then I understand. Your grammar is applauding though, I found no error.

 

-Or so he thinks until the day he finds them.
Is it really supposed to be ‘them’? Because I find it more appropriate to use ‘that person’.  In the earlier sentence, it was implied that his mate is a singular person so I suggest you change it. But if it is made on purpose, correct me.  

 

Plot:

The flow is consistent. The details are so graphic I almost thought I was inside the au. I really like how the characters are dealing with their own inhibitions. It wasn't rushed and it wasn't draggy at the same time so I really hope you keep the flow consistent. 

 

Character Development:

I like how Seunghyun‘s character is introduced and developed, from the in denials to possessiveness and even though he won’t admit it, his fright of having to love and serve his destined mate. It seemed so reasonable for him to get a bit scared because as you have said, he’s a ruthless killer and he’s just not the type of person to care and oh so suddenly, he desires a mere human and would probably protect him from anything.  I also enjoy how Seunghyun technically, has two personas. It was really fun to read him trying to contradict himself or rather, his wolf.

Also, Jiyong is such a sweetheart! He’s so vulnerable and a total complement of Seunghyun’s character.  And just like Jiyong, ohmygosh, I am in love with the possessiveness of Seunghyun because it wasn’t over the top and you managed to keep it on the sweet line and not cross the creepy part.

 

Grammar:

Your grammar is great, I must say but there were some typographical errors (I only spotted three-four). You should probably check them out to make your story more flawless. Nothing much to point out here because yet again, the grammar is excellent.

 

-I have already called a doctor, but your bleeding and it has to be stopped.
I have already called a doctor, but you’re bleeding and it has to be stopped.

 

-You have to make sure that he doesn't move much and isn't in cold places.
You have to make sure that he doesn’t move much and be kept warm.
The sentence is technically not wrong but c’mon, it sounded gauche.

 

P.S You don’t need to hyphen soulless, out loud

 

Originality:

I have read literally heaps of wolf au and I can frankly say that it wasn’t original anymore. There's something different with your story though, and if I have to pinpoint it out it was the mention of Seunghyun not being a werewolf but a real wolf. AT LEAST YOU DIDN’T USE EXO, then it would have been zero in originality, don't get me wrong because I love EXO (lol my username says it all) and wolf au but sometimes, it gets too used that it doesn't have the same effect on me as it does the first times I read this kind of plot.

 

Personal Enjoyment:

KYAAA GTOP GTOP GTOP GTOP! I can totally say that I enjoyed every bit of it, part of it is because I ship gtop hardcore but mostly, it’s because it was a really good read. Thumbs up.  I just, ugh, I love Seunghyun’s character. You managed to characterize him perfectly with his wolf and all that. I had moments (especially in chapter 3) where I literally squealed and smacked my ipad because great! <3

Apologies for taking more than enough time giving this review and for only reviewing up until chapter 5. I feel like I owe you an explanation because I don’t like people waiting for my reviews (I feel like I’m so irresponsible and unprofessional) so again, I’m sorry! I have preliminary exams coming up and my dancing school isn't giving me much time to rest either. I'm going to quit working in this shop after I finish all my pending requests so from here onwards, I'll only review up till chapter 5. If this disappoints you, then again, I'm sorry! I’ll keep reading though! And you’ll definitely hear from me :DD <3

 

Anyways, please credit me and the shop! And I hoped I helped at least a tad xD