disenchanted

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Love is just smoke raised with the fumes of sighs.

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Rinininette #1
Chapter 1: Woah this is sad but everything can't be always bright and full of glitter and happiness
Thank you for this story
baebycheesecake
#2
Chapter 1: "Nothing lasts forever but be honest, babe~
It hurts but it may be the only way~"

That's the only thing that entered my mind after reading this!
arthemysia
#3
Chapter 1: I just can't stop tearing up... so stubborn. this story lead me by its beautiful words. it spikes up the broken heart feeling... ommaaa~~~╮(╯3╰)╭
mushuu234 #4
Chapter 1: This is perfect; the choice of words and how you've written this is simply amazing. This evokes my emotions so easily with just a couple words of yours, it's left me with tear stains and sadness. And it's also very very beautiful <3
Exoticzombie
#5
Chapter 1: THIS IS PERFECT... I am sad, depressed and I've been lacking sleep and I'm sitting here reading this. Crying so much this is holymoly.

The way you work with your words and everything is so beautiful and lovely and did I told you that it is beautiful?
NotAppropriate
#6
Chapter 1: You seem to have a magical touch with your words. It's like everything you write turns to freaking gold. Jongin frustrates the hell out of me here. But I'm a contradiction because I love dark, brooding protagonists. He's broken inside, and Kyungsoo can't seem to fix and patch him up, no matter how hard he tries and loves him. I doubt anyone could. "Sometimes happy endings aren’t always what we think they’ll be.” There will always be bittersweet endings when it come to the greatest love stories. Loved this. I think I need to have your stories for breakfast, lunch, dinner and supper!
kamikazepigeon
#7
This is so perfect and bittersweet. The foreword sentence really got to me, I don't know why. You have a great way with words, thank you for this.