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Twisted [HIATUS]
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It's finally their midterms week and Chanmi is cramming like most of the students because she has been a lazy bun during the past days. "Chanmi you're so stupid." Chanmi sighs as she puts her books at her locker.

Kyungsoo appears out of nowhere and leans his head at the locker next to Chanmi.

 


"Ohmygod! You're going to give me a heart attack if you continue doing that." Chanmi points and glares at Kyungsoo.

Kyungsoo holds Chanmi's pointing hand and pokes his cheeks using it. "I fixed my hair for you, don't you like it?" Kyungsoo raises his brow at Chanmi.

Chanmi pulled her hand and rummages Kyungsoo's hair. "Anything suits you." She smiled and closes her locker and turns away from Kyungsoo to hide her blushing face.

Kyungsoo pulls his mirror and scowls trying to fix his hair, "Mimi don't you know how long I prepared this hair? I spent 2 hours on this and you just messed it up"

Chanmi faced Kyungsoo with an annoyed face, "I thought it was for me?"

Kyungsoo put his mirror back in his pocket and smiled. "I was joking."

Kyungsoo opened his arms. "What does that mean?" Chanmi crossed her arms. "Hug?" Kyungsoo raised his shoulder and tilts his head to the side.

Chanmi only smiled and shook her head and walks pass Kyungsoo and pulled his ear.

Kyungsoo removed Chanmi's hand on his ear and held it tight. "Where do you want to go?"

"I dont know Kyungsoo. I need to s

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molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.
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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
x-Sufiee-x #3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^
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