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Twisted [HIATUS]
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Sehun was shivering. He was looking at everyone around him. "What do you guys want from me?"

Sehun was tied on a chair, hair dripping with cold water. Jongin poured more cold water on Sehun.

"Are you really gay or are you only pretending?" Kyungsoo held on Sehun's shoulders and raised one of his brows.

"Mommy~ Why are you guys doing this to me?!!" Sehun looked up and cried. Kyungsoo looked down and shook his head and left.

"Just answer the damn question!" Jongin kicked the chair which caused it to fall.

"IM GAY FOR GOODNESS SAKE! WHY WONT YOU GUYS BELIEVE ME?! NOW PLEASE CAN YOU LET ME GO!" Sehun shouted, saliva showering everywhere.

"Ewwwww" Tao looked at Sehun from the corner in disgust.

The door suddenly opened with a loud bang, the room lightened and Sehun's eyes caught a glimpse of hope.

His knight in shining armor came.

Luhan was there to save him from this rude people. Luhan ran to Sehun and checked him if he was okay. "I'm okay now you're finally here."

Their faces are slowly nearing each other as they as each other lovingly when Sehun suddenly felt a heavy thing on top of his manhood and he realized he was only dreaming and that Chanmi has to ruin it by placing a bowling ball on his lap

"WTF CHANMI DID YOU KNOW THAT YOU CAN KILL ME WITH THAT?!!!!!" Sehun roared and everyone in the bowling alley looked at him.

"Im sorry I thought you were asking for a ball si

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molayoppa
Guys I know it's past mid-October already and I'm sorry. It's just that my class which was supposed to end last Oct. 10 was extended till the 22nd.

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summertwinkle #1
Chapter 7: I have to say I'm a bit confused..I think you lost me after you introduced the EXO gang lol but in some way I think you're trying to make some kind of love square. So facts are Kyungsoo -> Chanmi, Sehun -> Chanmi, Chanmi -> Sehun but moving on a little bit to Kyungsoo, maybe Luhan -> Sehun? maybe Rest of Exo -> Chanmi???

I think you are kinda moving a bit too fast and the characters need more development. Firstly...why did Luhan think Chanmi was a girl??? I was under the impression she looks like a girl until Luhan mistook her for a guy. Secondly, I think I need a bit more flashback on Chanmi's middle school life...and if not flashback at least have some of the characters talk among themselves about the past Chanmi? Did she used to look girly? Why does everyone know her?

Sehun is very transparent...I'm suspecting the gay thing is an act and Sehun is either conscious or subconsciously aware of his real feelings and I'm sure it'll be explained in time. So you're doing ok with Sehun but I just feel like I don't know enough about Chanmi. And then all of a sudden, all these random characters get thrown in before her character is developed enough to move the plot in a certain direction. And I think I read in the summary that she wanted to ask her gay friend for advice...I don't see any advice asking???....

These are just some of my comments/confusion, but I feel your story idea has potential. I look forward to reading more.
summertwinkle #2
Chapter 2: What is the CR O.O? If you don't mind explaining to me. I know it must be referring to the washroom but I just wrap my head around the abbreviation.
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#3
Chapter 5: Lol. Luhan is obviously turning gay for sehun. But, i'm a bit upset that they won't last in the end. cause sehun's srsly confused.
myungsookrystal #4
Chapter 4: Luhan gay?? lol really?
kambing97 #5
Chapter 4: awww the other guys like her too? dont worry you story is amazing ><
myungsookrystal #6
Chapter 2: Your story is interesting~^^