alice: i enjoyed her face, she's so pretty. some grammatical errors, but i think i can understand it. and it was sad to know that her mother had died when giving her birth. so she is being shy because she felt guilty toward her mother, and that's really sad. i mean, it's not her fault :( and so sad she is the awkward and quiet type, and that's why in the shy candy plotline, i chose minra for the closest friend. you did a great job, your character's personality and history did match with the plotline. love it!<3

minra: agreed with alice, i enjoy her face, and her personality too. that's so sad knowing she live with her father only, that's why she has the boyish-attitude, right? right. and yes, your character is really match with the plotline. if you're choosen, i will be so happy to put some pranks on you! (alice don't kill me.) and yeah, the first meeting with suga is so awkward, but it's still look cute in my eyes. good job, and thanks for applying!

taylor: omg! that was sad! but I love this charcter the quiet and awkward type, this would go perfect! excellen

alice: easy to read, great job! i see, so she loves cheesee so much, (omg minra you have many victims.) she learnt music from her classmates, and then she listened the music and she enjoyed it. she began to practice singing and preparing to show her parents. now, can you put more details there? like how her classmates help her, and what way she practice and prepare to show her parents? for the character personality, the lovely one isn't childish. she is mature, friendly, and lovely, of course. optimistic can be added too. and she is responsible, because she is dilligent. i'm sure i put that diliginet in the plotline. now, can you fix it? (and because we don't need more pranksters and funny people, minra is enough lol i'm joking minra.) first meeting with taehyung is interesting. taehyung is just way too confident, i see. XD

minra: it is easy to read, and i agreed with alice. you should only fix errors above. thanks for applying!

taylor: Agree with both .

alice: it was good to see your character personality! and your app is simple and neat too. that's good 'how her dream exists' i'm thinking, her voice is so beautiful, isn't it? but dear, the lovely one is not the dorky or the laugh-maker. she is lovely, like feminin. yes, of course she is friendly, but a big no-no with awkward turtle, remember? she is friendly, that's why she never feeling awkward. her first meeting is kinda cute. omg i just noticed the zelo from b.a.p one XD well you already fixed it, and it's more likely to the lovely one. but dear, can you describe more with the 'i'm the feminine one'? i mean, it's too short and it's not detailed. taehyung is so clumsy, isn't he? now you only need to fix that one, and you're done. c:

minra: when alice loves the 'how her dream exists' one, me, myself loves the 'how she became hyomi' i think that one is more to the character history. and again, i love the 'i'm the heart of party' because yes, the lovely one loves being around people and making new friends. and i'm agree with alice, again. the lovely one is not the dorky, the laugh-maker, and big no-no to childish. and again, agreed to alice. she is friendly, but why she is being an awkward turtle? the first meeting, that's the interesting one. especially the relationship, one-sided love. and it's from the character's side. no need to comment for her first meeting with taehyung, cause alice already took that. you only need to fix the errors above. thanks for applying!

taylor: Very nice, I love the simplness in your personaitly and the caring. Thanks for applying.