Honestly I think this story deserves more attention. Good work :)

*whispers* ..... so good. More.

LOL I keep coming back to reread this over and over.

Chapter 1: So. Many. Feels!

I don't usually read on this site unless it's for reviews, but I am so glad I read this. The emotions you portray are brilliant and you don't have the mistakes I see far too often on this site (ie verb tense, characterization, grammar). This is a really great story and it gave me chills. Good luck in your contest!

Chapter 1: I'm gonna try and read all your fics because this was refreshing. Wow. Some good stuff. I can't seem to copy on my iPad but the bit where Yixing explains why he can drink black coffee is the best <3 Overall, intriguing to read!

Chapter 1: "There are lots of people who mistake their imagination for their memory, but only a few mistake their memories for their imagination." and "Friendship is a paradox. The parties involved in a friendship have no ties apart from the agreement of being ‘friends’. If a party felt annoyed with the other, the relationship could easily be broken, yet ironically, it is this ‘friendship’ that encourages them to tolerate their ‘friend’."

These few sentences really hit home base for me. When I read the prologue I was eager to read the story cause I thought it would be something close to my story with my friends. But yeah, it was completely not what I expected. Though I actually saw the ending coming at the beginning of the second section XP Cause I dunno why...when I plan stories (that I never end up writing) in my head, I always try to make twists in the endings to make it more interesting (one of them is kinda similiar to this) ...but often my endings just end up awkward. Yours really rounded off well! I loved it!

Still, even thought the plot line is very different from my reality and the characters' background is also very different, something clicked between Sehun and I, and also Jongin and I, that I can't really explain with words. But thank you for this. I've been going through lately and was looking for something that would make my heart sip and wrench and feel beautiful again.

Chapter 1: Such a twist! It was great, and Yixing is just wow. Kai is cute and I pity Sehun.

It sounds really interesting! Anticipating your update! :D