Make 'Em Laugh

Description

After the sudden disappearance of stand-up comedian Park Chanyeol, private investigator Kim Joonmyun begins to uncover the darkness behind the comedian's goofy grins.

 

Warnings: mentions of drug use/suicide.

 

Foreword

 

Kim Joonmyun has an excellent sense of humor, and woe to anyone who doubts him. It's just that he has a different way of expressing his humor. Joonmyun lets his wit peek out through subtle puns that almost always go missed, a slight tilt of the eyebrows when making a microscopically suggestive statement, mismatching socks when he's feeling whimsical... His assistant Huang Zitao always tells him to lighten up, but it's hard when Joonmyun's career is built on obsession with a healthy side of paranoia.

 

The detective doesn't like to think about how investigating cases of adultery is his greatest source of income. Because even when the suspected partner is innocent, it doesn't negate the fact that Joonmyun was hired in the first place. When Joonmyun dreamed of being a private investigator, he could never have predicted that he would spend most of his career driving relationships apart. It doesn't take someone with Joonmyun's observational skills to see the lump in a client's throat, the sweaty palms, the thinly veiled dread of the investigative results.

 

When Joonmyun receives the phone call from Park Yura, he is wrapping up yet another adultery case, this time between a Korean-Chinese couple. His client, a skyscraper of a man, had suspected his husband, a Korean man half his size with a bright, kittenish smile and a musical laugh, of cheating on him with another soft spoken, round-cheeked Korean man. It turned out that he wasn't just cheating on Joonmyun's client with that man, but also with the other Korean man's Chinese husband. As soon as Joonmyun revealed the messy love rectangle, he had pressed the business card of his favorite divorce lawyer into the softly sobbing client's hand.

 

Joonmyun is clearing away the pile of tissues from his desk when he hears a soft knock on the door to his office.

 

"Come in!" he calls, quickly shoving his waste basket aside and straightening his framed illustration of Sherlock Holmes.

 

"You must be Park Yura," Joonmyun greets her warmly, but with reservation. He must be careful to not seem overly enthusiastic as he is wont to do, since an overwhelming majority of his clients would prefer not to be clients at all.

 

"Yes, nice to meet you." She gives him a tight smile, and Joonmyun's mind automatically goes into detective mode. Yura is a tall woman who carries herself with a confidence that makes her seem even taller. But the way she can't quite meet Joonmyun's eyes and the fidgetiness in her fingertips suggest that her customary composure has been shaken.

 

"What can I do for you today?"

 

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onews-chicken-line
#1
Chapter 1: My heart...oh my pained heart...<\3 Maybe Chanyeol went to the river to find Joonmyun? Since he thought Joonmyun was an angel? So he was just trying to go to the place Joonmyun was from...T^T So many tears~~ But yes, wonderfully written. Really, really wonderfully written.
Nathalaia
#2
Chapter 1: I must be a masochist. That's the only thing that can possibly begin to explain why I read this.

I think I only saw the 'angst' tag and not the 'tragedy'... Sob. Allow me to wallow in sorrow and slight self-pity for a moment.

...

There, I'm done.

Anyway-! As always, truly terrific. I can't help but wonder, what if Junmyeon had stayed? Sob. This breaks my heart. He isn't at fault, not at all, but it's so, so tragic. Poor Junmyeon and poor Chanyeol and poor everyone, really. It pleases me that Chanyeol didn't leave without seeing anyone coming for him (I think), but it also saddens me that he *did* leave nevertheless.

And the stones in the pockets... And Junmyeon keeping it a secret. Sob.

Despite the fact that my heart is currently on the floor, torn to pieces, this was a very, very good fic. A great flow and a wonderful plot, all this written quite beautifully.

Splendid work!
AshXIII #3
Chapter 1: At the end of the story I was totally going ape crazy (mentally, of course. I still have some dignity to preserve [sniffs haughtily]) reading that bit. But then I scrolled back up to the tag lines and I just nodded in acceptance. My fault in walking and stepping on the obvious land mine.

You did put 'tragedy'…(sighs dramatically)

Tragic death and definitely unrequited love aside (Chan Yeol's awakening to the beauty and that kiss totally sidelined me - thought it would end in a nice manner - you totally killed me with the ending), it was a good read. Nicely paced. And believable when it comes to Jun Myeon's line of work. Let's face it. Some people would write stories and they would have some potholes on some things, particularly involving jobs or certain descriptions. You did a fine job and a thorough description on what he did on his job. Nice.
smoljae
#4
Absolutely broke my heart...I wonder what Joonmyun will do after all this...If only Joonmyun stayed by his side,this might not had happened...It's not his fault tho,he was ust rrying to help...But I can't stop wondering,what if it ended differently.What if Joonmyun saved Chanyeol and they were happy together.Sobs,I love this fic a lot.
miraise #5
wow I really didn't expect this at all. whenever i find a plot-driven fic, I always get really excited cause fanfiction in this fandom is usually just about the character's experiences or how they plan to get this particular couple together. but this was just... wow. I really love how joonmyun gradually started to genuinely care for chanyeol, despite never meeting him, and aaah I wish he survived but this was still really good ;-;;;
maskedrose13
#6
Chapter 1: This is beautiful!
But i don't get the 'rocks he found in chanyeols pocket,
What is that mean?
shun-kun
#7
Chapter 1: OUCH! Yeol, noooo! this was so saaaad~. I can't.. X_X
The way you described the evolution, my stomach did not like it. T_T I just wanted to take him in my arms and protect him. And that desperate "take me with you" no no no no T__T They should have met earlier, things would have been different (I think). Yeol would not have lost his captivating smile T_T Rocks... T__T T__T

I would add that I liked Jongdae's character. [SO surprising ^^] He was like, smooth, relaxed and clearly happy to live [his ex-job..... XD] a little breeze of freshness in the drama.


May I request a bit of Happy Virus fluff for another fic?? :D To get over those heartbreaking feels T___T

Once again, sooo good T__T Tanks!! :D
ayulindahs #8
ohmygod this is great!!!! you made myself crying at 1am in the morning thanks so much for making this fanfict!!!
imperfect22
#9
Wow... Im crying... Great fic
HappyPistachio
#10
Chapter 1: Wow, heart wrenching story! I would love to reread more of your work! Keep writing! <3