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Months passed by and yes you hated him making you stop talking to Hyunsik along the way and became the quiet you once again. This actually made Hyunsik worried and tried to make you smile but you brushed him off as if he was a fly. You were angry yes and you felt bad for taking it out on Hyunsik so you started to talk to him again and thankfully he accepted it happily. Teachers all thought that you and Hyunsik were dating but thats was not even the slightest bit ever going to happen. He was really a gum you get annoyed but he was a decent person but not enough to date as he was still friends with Baekhyun. You were still mad at Baekhyun and he still haven't learnt his lesson so you never talked to him after that and though he tried to talk to you, you ignored him and there was and episode where you actually cursed at him cause you were really angry and annoyed. Eventhough you are so over him, the hurt was still there it never went away but you learnt a lesson not to fall for a guy when he's nice to you.

After school classes ended and later you never met him again and hoping it will be kept that way.

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BaeDaeKyon #1 Dec 25, 2014 13:52:21

I don't think it'd be right for me to decide for you whether or not you should continue writing or cease to write all together. If it's something that you really enjoy doing then by all means continue on doing it. With that said, on a constructive criticism stance, this could use a lot of work. I'm assuming this was meant to be a one shot and it was a very short one at that. It confused me as to what the purpose of it was and I'm not sure all of the characters you listed were put into the one chapter. I'm still unaware of the relationships and how they are tied together. This isn't meant to shut you down and cause you to curl into a dark corner but from one writer to another its important to captivate the audience and still be able to tell the story so that it makes sense and interests the reader. This way, you'll get subscribers, comments and even votes. I'm not a perfect writer myself so I'm not coming at you to say I'm the best writer in the world because I know I'm not. I go through like 20 different drafts if I'm in a writing mood. That being said, I'd be glad to help you if you want. I'm free as a bird and have absolutely nothing to do but day dream and read other fan fictions.

Good luck on your writing journey :D