Poetry In Motion

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When Joon can't calm his churning thoughts Seungho is there to help him. What harm can there be in watching him dance?

Foreword

Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. Events are 100% completely made up. I do not own or know any of the people mentioned herein nor do I make any such claims.

Notes: This is the first KPop fanfiction I ever wrote and it's the first one I'm submitting to this site. I hope I do everything right!

Please bear in mind this was written a few years ago and MBLAQ's living arrangements have changed since then.

 

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SilkyGreen #1
Chapter 1: This was simply amazing. I took so much pleasure in reading this, you can't even imagine.
The way you described Joon's dance was purely beautiful, and if "poetry in motion" can describe Joon's moves, then simple "poetry" can describe your writing.
Seungho's feelings were portrayed well, and I could easily see how he felt through your words. It's a bit sad that the story ended like this, with Seungho leaving, but it's fitting in a way. It makes sense that he reacted like this, if we take into account how confused he was about his feelings for Joon. I'm curious to see what Joon's feelings were during his dance routine and after, to say the truth, but I strongly believe that your story is just perfect as it is.
I really, really loved this, it's a beautiful piece of writing, thank you so much for posting it! :)
satrina7 #2
I love this fic, hope you can write more JeungJoon/JoonHo ^^
Tobito #3
Chapter 1: Plz write more *_*
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