Chapter 1: This was really cute ...and unfortunately really short ;A; Will you ever make a sequel for this? It seems complete on its own, but I really like your writing style and I'd like to read more from you :3
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Can I be a grammar Nazi and correct your typos?
"He turned to Jun and smiled sweetly as the boy his cone. Jun nodded"
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“There was something on you lip.”
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I don't mean to be rude/offensive I just wanted to help ;n;
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