The Last Sketchbook
Reviewer: YifanForever

Title (4/5):
The title definitely has relevance to the story so I like it in that aspect.  The title itself is not attention grabbing and yet it still manages to resonate with me.  By saying it's the last sketchbook, it gives the story a bit of finality and emphasis on endings.  I really like the title because of how symbolic and fitting it is.

Graphics/Appearance (4/5):
You have a graphic that very much captures the theme of the story.  It has the elements of the sketchbook and the graduation ceremony, showing it's their last year of school.  The main characters are in the poster.  I can't help but feel like the poster could be a bit more artistic than just having it be a collage of the pictures put together.  As for the rest of the story, I was able to read it fine.  The font and font size were legible.

Description/Foreword (14/15):
There's really nothing wrong with the description.  The repetition of Taekwoon's name doesn't throw me off even though it should.  I get the intent that you are trying to emphasize how obsessed with Taekwoon, Hongbin really is.  As for the foreword, there's nothing wrong with it at all.

Characterization (17/20):
The characterization was very well done.  Though this was only a oneshot, I got a lot out of the characters.  It's pretty evident that Hongbin is sort of a quiet kid who doesn't have many friends.  He spends his time drawing alone, more specifically drawing Taekwoon.  He's been told he has to achieve higher goals by his parents, which is something I can totally relate with.  Because of that, he's withdrawn.  Yes, I somehow think all the pressure that's bein