Chapter 1: Hey, thanks for posting on my wall. I read this story of yours when you first posted on my wall but I didn't have a chance to give you any feedback- sorry. It was a good read however there were a few mistakes here and there, but they weren't fatal ones :D
I was able to get to the end without a problem - I was eager to find out what was going to happen. Your writing style is nice and I would encourage you to keep writing. I don't feel like this story needs a sequel/spin-off of whatever. I think it would be better to keep one shots as just that, a one shot. But if you do, please post it on my wall and I will give it a read. I look forward to reading more from you.
Good Luck,
From a Happy Reader xx
Chapter 1: hello there. I saw your post on my wall so I decided to pay a visit :)
OMG Kai's such a a good boyfriend material here :D he's so loving and caring and. I'm so gonna be melted under his soft and tender gaze.. it's good. I hope it would be much longer, though, for it would explain things that hadn't been said. but this one is good, really
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