the demon within

Description

I must repent.

It is the only reason Wu Fan agrees to his father's ridiculous idea in the first place. It is the only thing that keeps him rooted in his seat, keeps his tongue still in his mouth as he bites it to hold back the words of protest that yearn to escape.

It is this thought, and this thought alone, that has kept Wu Fan in his rightful place where he belongs. As the son of a Minister, it is his duty to learn the tricks of the trade and to follow in his father's footsteps.

This, he supposes, is just another step forward in that direction. It is necessary.

I must repent.

Foreword

I'm not happy with this at all, but it was something I sat down with the intent to finish and I actually did. I guess I'm kind of proud of it at the same time. I had a few themes in mind when I was writing this, one of which is plainly obvious, but kudos (and my eternal love) to anyone else who can get the others. ^_^

Warning for religious themes just in case anyone may find this potentially upsetting.

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peanutoast
#1
Chapter 1: Please update soon, this is soooo promissing. It´s almost like poetry!
LittleGuri #2
Chapter 1: Omggggg xD tbh, i skipped some scene bc i don't understand english well xD but i understand the story and i love it!!!!! XD more taoris juseyoo ♥
pinku_panda #3
Chapter 1: om my god sweet lord this is so beautiful
pls write more taoris
KouAkira #4
Chapter 1: Wow.
It's good. :)
HunhaNH97 #5
Chapter 1: Keep update xD