Heavy In Your Arms

Description

When love begins to weigh them down, how will they keep from drowning?

"My love has concrete feet

My love’s an iron ball

Wrapped around your ankles

Over the waterfall

I'm so heavy in your arms."

Foreword

A LuSoo/HanSoo based oneshot, inspiration from the song Heavy In Your Arms by Florence and the Machine.

Written for ♥ྀRare couples writing contest ♥ྀ

Title: Heavy In Your Arms

Pairing: LuSoo/HanSoo (Luhan x Kyungsoo)

Rating: PG13

Genre: Romance, Angst, Drama

Word Count: 4,863

Summary: When love begins to weigh them down, how will they keep from drowning?

07/21 Update- Second and last chapter (sequel) was added, hope you enjoy!

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akared #1 Jan 13, 2015 03:17:23

Chapter 2: wow, this really bring me to tears...

akared #2 Jan 13, 2015 03:08:30

Chapter 1: WHAT????!!!! The hell is wrong with himm!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

red-inked-dragon #3 Jul 23, 2014 12:24:32

Chapter 2: Wow! Good job!! I love love loved the first chapter - even though it's too sad and broken and aksjdnkcas *smacks luhan in the head because he deserves it* but it was perfect for me!! And then I checked the tag and saw there was an update and I was a bit skeptical at first (because I loved the first part and It felt perfect when it ended there) but oh wow nice sequel as well!!!! The events are justified and all :D

Author-nim! More more more HanSoo please!! :D

NotAppropriate #4 Jul 22, 2014 14:57:26

Chapter 2: I love me a Hansoo! This was good, but I felt that they got back together too quickly. Even if it has been four years, I felt Kyungsoo was too forgiving and Luhan has it all too easy to have Kyungsoo back in his arms. I blame my cynical mind and my desire for more angst before happy endings. >.< Do write more Hansoo if you can!

kyungiiee #5 Jul 22, 2014 07:13:34

Chapter 2: Omg..soo cute..next story please

AznDuckies #6 Jul 21, 2014 22:04:16

Chapter 2: Sequel to the sequel man but this time fluff lol my heart breaks reading this. U need to heal it

hellabanz #7 Jul 21, 2014 21:34:03

Chapter 2: OHH so gooood although this wasn't needed this was the first story i felt okay with an unhappy ending

Kieu-My #8 Jun 24, 2014 16:33:08

Chapter 1: Omg you need to make a sequel it is so good my poor soo

AznDuckies #9 Jun 17, 2014 10:35:36

Chapter 1: Sequel sequel