Chapter 1: No;-; you can't kill Hunnie;-; they were not even really together, they didn't have time to shower each other with their love;-;

Chapter 1: I saw the title and the only thing that came to mind was the combined term of 'frenemies'. Not that it has anything to do with the story itself but I was amused.

I was not, however, amused with the rest of the story. That was incredibly bittersweet. T_T It's very short and there's not a great deal of time to show development of their characters but it's still powerful for the subject matter and how you describe them. That kissing scene was abrupt but oh the feels!

And I felt so bad for Tao when he was trying to protect Sehun from the truth and only ended up damning them both in the end. Gyah! It ! Then again, you capture perfectly the very horrible nature of war in general and how it can tear people apart with so little effort.

You can definitely feel that heavy sense of inevitability with Tao too as he walks through the end there. It's like, you hold your breath trying to ignore something that you don't want to see but know is there anyway and when you find that truth, you can't seem to breathe even then. Poor babies.

Short, powerful, and sad. Well done and thank you for sharing.

i seriously loved it! please update soon!

Chapter 1: OMG this is sad, perfectly angsty and confictual T^T *cries*