Fallen

Description

 

The only thing accompanies him through his years of living is pain.  It is a curse, he had to endure.

 

Foreword

Hi,

This story is written for a writing contest, I'm not confident of my writing skill but yeah the prizes is tempting ((lmao))

 

 

 

 

 

inuprncs
I pour my blood, sweats in this story. i'm dead-beat. idk anymore

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izzatiexo
#1
Chapter 1: yehet!~
u know it's kind of confusing but it's super terbaik~
hehe
shana20 #2
Chapter 1: Well I'm also confused too haha. I'm also hoping for a sequel to know the connection between the past and the present. Even still, this story has a potential if you could extend a few chapters with some back stories of tao and sehun. Nothing I could say how you write about luyoon. They are just adorable :3 thanks for making this fanfic!
magicgdragon24 #3
Chapter 1: i hope you update and write soon! :3
YoonHaeChoding #4
Chapter 1: Great story :)the plot is really amazing.I hope u will write a sequel :)
afiqahalya
#5
Chapter 1: LUYOON !! Why they have to be separate again poor them !! SEQUEL plzz i want them together !!!
YoonHaeChoding #6
Luyoon! <3
Yooniya #7
Interesting!!!!
Luyoon?
Update soon.... ^-^
afiqahalya
#8
looks interesting !! update soon