Moon

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Moon

[storyline; jasmine96]

 

Between the deepening night day

Then you come to surprise me

You are the White that always protect me

Make darkness run away from my life

 

I’m sorry I lost my way again, again, again

The cold night breeze caress me then, you say

“So baby hold on, now I worry to leave you”

But stubborn I’m let your warn pass like nothing

 

You told me those stories about the moonlight

With something cliche and something so funny

Always remind me beautiful picture

Please, take me with you

 

Because I can’t touch you

Here can’t even hold you

The moonlight greets me but

I just can't give her my smile

 

This tragic story

Please doesn’t come true

The more I wish you back the more pain I’ll get

 

So I promise to stop, stop, stop, stop (yeah)

Can’t handle this stop, stop, stop, stop (yeah)

 

I’m doing okay now under moonlight

Stop worrying me, Babe

Don’t want your wings will get wet

 

[source:jasmine96]

Foreword

P.S. The lyric above isn’t the real translation of EXO’s Moonlight song. I change the lyric to you can sing with it and to suit the story.

P.S.S. I got the feeling after continue to hear this song. The song is my favorite in Overdose album (beside overdose, thunder, run, love love love) hahahaha. I love all of them. (~^o^)~

P.S.S.S. Please leave your opinion [and feeling] in here. With the comment, upvote, and subscribe :D It’s like an oxygen! It’s give me more strength to continue.

P.S.S.S.S. Thank you for read it and leave the oxygen! [and thank you for you who try sing the song with my lyric] kekekekeke

P.S.S.S.S.S. If you curious about the poster. It made by me! Hahahaha. I’m not friend with photoshop or corel or editing program like that. I can’t use them. It’s a problem, since I want a poster in my story. So... I made it with hand. My drawing skill isn’t that good. But I tried my best. It’s hard to draw Kyungsoo. But the drawing it’s close enought, isn’t it? Hahahaha. I hope you like it.

 

 


 

Moon's Review

1st - Angel Rose Reviews   LegaC  : Full Review

"I really like the plotline and the characterization you wrote in 'Moon'. How the moments and memories that experienced together and I think that that it quite romantic. I reccomend this story to BaekSoo shippers and who would like past memories. Keep on writing and keep up the good work!"

 

2nd - ۞ LUXE ۞ -empress  : Full Review

  "The plot is original. It took a while for me to discover what the plot really is but somehow I did. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for requesting! "

 

 

3rd - ♛ Absolute Royalty Review & Oneshot Request Shop   yumi143  : Full Review

"I enjoyed it tremendously towards the end. It was slightly boring for me in the beginning, because I didn't know what was going on. However, as the story progressed, my curiosity was piqued and I kept on reading to know what would happen next and I had a bitter lump in my throat. Tres bien, I say, and keep up the good work!"

4th - JUST 4 FUN Request Shop   miro-chan  : Full Review

"Honestly, it is an original idea but I can see it getting used alot so I'm not too sure but your story is the first to have two main characters meet up in hospital so kudos to you. This wasn't my favorite story but everybody has their own tastes and preferences so some may like it but some might not. It's good you have alot of supporters^^"

 

5th - [Pay It Forward* Multi Review Shop]   story reviewer  : Full Review

"First of all, I loved the poster. The events were sequential and made sense, and was simple enough to follow. Though I think if you dragged it out and focused on the details, I think it would’ve made it more interesting for the reader. There wasn’t a twist in the story that I wasn’t expecting, so it didn’t keep me entertained. I do want to mention that you have done a great job as I know English is a weird language and is very different in terms of sentence structure to other languages so I do understand the struggle. You have already done an outstanding job and you’re a brave person in attempting to write in English :)"

6th - ☯ Eternally Exotic Review Shop ☯  story reviewer  : Full Review

"It was an absolutely beautiful and heart-wrenching fanfic to read. It is a piece of literature that is uniquely catered to pull at the heartstrings of a reader. The ending was absolutely wonderful, it is very hard to find words to describe it."


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Finally the end T^T

Comments

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thecrud #1
Chapter 7: I'm reading it again and I'm tearing up*sob*
It's great. *sob*
thecrud #2
Chapter 7: I dont even realised that my tears drop. It is really sad and can't be descbribe. Thanks for this story. Author nim
baekdoxoxo #3
Chapter 7: i in cry my eyeballss out.. this is..
master piece.. ill treasure the moonlight song even more .. thank you author nim
aftermags #4
Chapter 7: This is amazing!!! I'm bawling right now. I just can't.. HAAALLPPP!! It's so sad and beautful at the same time! Good job in making me cry! I'm the kind who are really bard to cry and you made me!! amazing!! Keep it up
idobaek #5
Chapter 7: I cried a han river :'(( this is so freaking sad yet so good authornim u filled my baeksoo feels thank u :') plz make a sequel or maybe another baeksoo fic i really cant get enough from these two >< ♡♡♡
knditksbh #6
Chapter 7: okay...i cried, so hard. under my blanket, its too hard you know to hold my sobs because this is so amazing angsty!!! I'm a big fans of angst and i'm not kidding when i said your story is simply beautiful and can make me crying like a baby~ /it's hard for me to crying but you make me crying since the first/

thank you for a amazing story, its too sad im alr crying just read the first paragraph lol okay im so emotional because baeksoo love story in this is too beautiful even tho no words love cant be saying by one of them but their behave alr tell what is love huhuhu--

hwaiting!! i love your writing style and make an angst again cause i will be your fans then XD
dyoyahhh
#7
Chapter 7: I cried..reading angst.. for the first time..
thank you for such a great story.. T________T
knditksbh #8
Chapter 6: OMG! I FORGOT TO COMMENT TO THE PREV CHAP
its okay, im okay seriously /what did you do to me?/ LoL, im crying like a baby y'know. It hurts and i dunno again but yet this is still beautiful as always, their love story is beautiful, your story is beautiful huhuhu /crying mess/

im not ready for the last chapter, srsly LoL update soon author-nim. Fighting ^0^
knditksbh #9
Chapter 4: your story is indeed beautiful,
innocent yet beautiful kyungsoo and cheekily yet lovely baekhyun is perfect blended
and the story of the blind child and his six years older hyung/hopeless guy with their happy ending. can baeksoo get the happy ending too? LoL
'because its like my heart' i want hug kyungsoo and baekhyun should joining too!

I love angst, I love baeksoo, I love your story so much, please update soon ^^