Moon
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Moon
[storyline; jasmine96]
Between the deepening night day
Then you come to surprise me
You are the White that always protect me
Make darkness run away from my life
I’m sorry I lost my way again, again, again
The cold night breeze caress me then, you say
“So baby hold on, now I worry to leave you”
But stubborn I’m let your warn pass like nothing
You told me those stories about the moonlight
With something cliche and something so funny
Always remind me beautiful picture
Please, take me with you
Because I can’t touch you
Here can’t even hold you
The moonlight greets me but
I just can't give her my smile
This tragic story
Please doesn’t come true
The more I wish you back the more pain I’ll get
So I promise to stop, stop, stop, stop (yeah)
Can’t handle this stop, stop, stop, stop (yeah)
I’m doing okay now under moonlight
Stop worrying me, Babe
Don’t want your wings will get wet
[source:jasmine96]
Foreword
P.S. The lyric above isn’t the real translation of EXO’s Moonlight song. I change the lyric to you can sing with it and to suit the story.
P.S.S. I got the feeling after continue to hear this song. The song is my favorite in Overdose album (beside overdose, thunder, run, love love love) hahahaha. I love all of them. (~^o^)~
P.S.S.S. Please leave your opinion [and feeling] in here. With the comment, upvote, and subscribe :D It’s like an oxygen! It’s give me more strength to continue.
P.S.S.S.S. Thank you for read it and leave the oxygen! [and thank you for you who try sing the song with my lyric] kekekekeke
P.S.S.S.S.S. If you curious about the poster. It made by me! Hahahaha. I’m not friend with photoshop or corel or editing program like that. I can’t use them. It’s a problem, since I want a poster in my story. So... I made it with hand. My drawing skill isn’t that good. But I tried my best. It’s hard to draw Kyungsoo. But the drawing it’s close enought, isn’t it? Hahahaha. I hope you like it.
Moon's Review
1st - Angel Rose Reviews ✎ LegaC : ❥ Full Review ✮
"I really like the plotline and the characterization you wrote in 'Moon'. How the moments and memories that experienced together and I think that that it quite romantic. I reccomend this story to BaekSoo shippers and who would like past memories. Keep on writing and keep up the good work!"
2nd - ۞ LUXE ۞✎ -empress : ❥ Full Review ✮
"The plot is original. It took a while for me to discover what the plot really is but somehow I did. I enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for requesting! "
3rd - ♛ Absolute Royalty Review & Oneshot Request Shop ✎ yumi143 : ❥ Full Review ✮
"I enjoyed it tremendously towards the end. It was slightly boring for me in the beginning, because I didn't know what was going on. However, as the story progressed, my curiosity was piqued and I kept on reading to know what would happen next and I had a bitter lump in my throat. Tres bien, I say, and keep up the good work!"
4th - JUST 4 FUN Request Shop ✎ miro-chan : ❥ Full Review ✮
"Honestly, it is an original idea but I can see it getting used alot so I'm not too sure but your story is the first to have two main characters meet up in hospital so kudos to you. This wasn't my favorite story but everybody has their own tastes and preferences so some may like it but some might not. It's good you have alot of supporters^^"
5th - [Pay It Forward* Multi Review Shop] ✎ story reviewer : ❥ Full Review ✮
"First of all, I loved the poster. The events were sequential and made sense, and was simple enough to follow. Though I think if you dragged it out and focused on the details, I think it would’ve made it more interesting for the reader. There wasn’t a twist in the story that I wasn’t expecting, so it didn’t keep me entertained. I do want to mention that you have done a great job as I know English is a weird language and is very different in terms of sentence structure to other languages so I do understand the struggle. You have already done an outstanding job and you’re a brave person in attempting to write in English :)"
6th - ☯ Eternally Exotic Review Shop ☯ ✎ story reviewer : ❥ Full Review ✮
"It was an absolutely beautiful and heart-wrenching fanfic to read. It is a piece of literature that is uniquely catered to pull at the heartstrings of a reader. The ending was absolutely wonderful, it is very hard to find words to describe it."
THANKS TO ⇒ Advertise and Recommend Shop AND Anonymous_1924
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