Love
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I guess this is kind of late since the drama Mimi has been out a long time ago and so has the song Breath, but for those of you who don't know Mimi is a short drama and you can watch it in Viki (it has Changmin in it!) and Breath is the accompanying OST for the drama.
I semi-finished watching the drama alongside watching a bunch of other really intense romance movies like One Day the 2011 movie (as well as reading the novel beforehand) and this sense of melancholic depression and bitterness just hit me and I had a funny feeling in my chest all day and I didn't know what to do with it. I was reading some books (again) and I thought I couldn't get into it unless I listen to some music, so I put something low and mellow. Obviously what I listened to were the Jonghyun/Tayeon (Korean) and Chen/ZhangLiYin (Chinese) versions of Breath and I couldn't even concentrate anymore cause the feels hit me double whammy.
Then my hand started itching, then I thought "You know what Imma get it all out as a poem/lyrics" (because thats what I do all the time I feel really intense). Next thing you know I have this very rough idea of where I wanted to head with it since most of the stories here (and no offence to you guys since your stories rock and make me laugh when I feel like punching someone) had a very cliché and naive notion of love, and I just felt like portraying that into my poem. Bish bash bosh and whaddya know it's done. It's not my first poem, but it is also very sketchy (so be gentle with me guys) since I just projected my feelings into the poem...so here it is! ^_^
(P.S. Read the poem with the songs if you would like)
Breath- Taeyeon and Jonghyun (Korean ver.)
Breath- Chen and Zhang Li Yin (Chinese ver.)
There's also a japanese version...
Breath- Changmin and Krystal (Japanese ver.)
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Foreword
Love
It is not so sweet
Or simple like they told me
Not so fulfilling
Like in the movies
It is an empty bitter feeling
Where I always
Wake and wonder
In pain, tears and sweat
Only to foolishly wonder
Why it hurts to breath
I think I remember
What love was to me
Something I used to feel
And which I now must supress
Unknowingly
Bitterly
Love was a figure
With a hand
Holding mine
Promising me the future
Without words
One look and I knew I would be his
It hurts to smile
When I think of you
My heart beats
Wondering where you are now
How are you?
My breath shakes
As I shape your name
In the air
What I would not do to return
To my foolish self
In my memories
Cast aside my future
For just that one
Moment
To be with him
I cry a river of bitterness
From inside me
Trying to remember
And supress
A face I used to love
Which now hurts me
To remember
Because I know
Beyond this melancholic hole
There was once
Love
Like baby steps
Slow and stedious
I cast your memories
Aside
I keep telling myself
I will be alright
In a world without
You
Without the remnants
Of my heart
Crushed in your love
Are you thinking of me?
A shy girl
Whose breath shook
When I first shaped your name
As it does now?
Does he remember the girl?
Who he taught to love
A girl without a faith in the world
He taught her to forgive
Took her hand
Made her forget about everything
And now you’re gone
I take a shaky breath
In hopes
The next day
Will bring me to you
Another day where you will finally
Fulfil your promise
From my memories
When you took a shaky breath
And told me
Of love
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Errrr....yeah. So that was it. If you liked it, comment. If you hated it bash away and comment. And if you really, really liked it I guess I'll upload some other ones I've been storing up in my dusty laptop. Have a nice day! >_<
(P.S. for those who saw the drama Mimi and cried I feel you T^T.... for those who saw One Day and cried also feel you T^T)
-min_ash- ~xoxo
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