The Black Pearl

Description

 

Wu Yifan was just a small fish in the big sea of the Chinese underground society.

All that changed when a girl who claimed to be his sister arrived at the doorstep of the crumbling building where he lived with his motley crew.

 

Foreword

A prompt by eunmi_18: Yifan as an awkward, older brother/gangster. 

warnings: language, mentions of ual abuse, baekyeol forever

11254 words 

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ficsystem #1
Chapter 1: okay...so i just realize...is it a one-shot story?
again...your story plays my emotion
this time idk what to say but...if i have damn money, i'm eager to make this story into a movie.
i read many fanfics and i do not just give this kind of comment to every story that consumes my sleeping time.
my favorite part is when Baek hit Yifan with the news that Ying Fei copied his outfit...it is so lovely.
good luck for your next stories.
thank you very much for this awesome work you share.
:D
aemilius #2
Chapter 1: WHYYYYY

SO GOOD

WJ YYY
eunmi_18 #3
Chapter 1: ok seriously this was epic :) i loved the baekyeol like seriously they're just perfect sobs aggressively my mind cannot fathom the cuteness of dopey omg how do you even come up with such perfect names? i loved how she instantly became the apple of their eyes tbqh like all they ever needed was a feminine touch cries but cold hard wyf though hah that jerk but he honestly only cared for his baby sis and showed it like a lol. love love love that she and sehun are in a relationship like he's my guilty pleasure in exo nowadays chuckles nervously
but there were just a few things i think did not quite tie up properly. like if sehun and ying fei were ing around, how did he not see tie tattoo earlier? unless they only always did the do in the missionary lol plus i still don't really get it if xing is really a bad guy or a good guy. also, if they already knew about xing's identity prior un ying fei's showing up, then how did they not know which family wyf belonged to?

i think this might be because i have this tendency to have a very slow grasp of things but i don't understand why they were all so upset about his family because they have been protected well now knowing that no one would dare to lay a finger on wyf.

excuse my way too in depth analysis because I'm really just super excited about this and how amazing it actually turned out to be :) i can't thank you enough for writing this beautiful piece full of beautiful baekyeol gayness and wyf playing a gaylord himself otl i loved how you portrayed her to be this exact replica of her brother and i find the idea of her towering over kyungsoo so damn adorable omg <3

ps i think that maybe there was like a teeny reference to luhan in the story made by kyungsoo while they were leaving the place. am i right or am i right? 8D
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