Chapter 1: This. Wow, this is so simple yet so very beautiful. I dont even know. Your style is very nice, you keep everything quite short but you still use descriptive words. It's not too much and not too less. The characters are very interesting and your setting is kinda unique. Though I could imagine the world gray and restricted, your style carried some colours.
I feel like Sehun should not be so passive? I feel like he should do something. But I guess that's just his character, that's his problem. He just always accepts and complies. The end was really heartbreaking and so final. There was no space left for hope or hints to something else. It was very final.
Liked it, it's a beautiful little piece. <3

Chapter 1: Omg I like the way you wrote this story
beautiful story :)

Chapter 1: oh my god this is daebak yet so heartbreaking story. ewww it must be hurt to know your beloved missing without any notice. crying crying ;;___;;

Chapter 1: Omg is so goooood !!