Would Have Been

Description

A little richer and he would have been happy.

A slightly bigger house and he would have been happy.

A little more perfect, and

 

he would have been happy,

Foreword

Side story/sequel (kinda?) to Smile Carnations

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marzy19 #1
Chapter 1: This is so unique
jamlessjiminne #2
Chapter 1: Finally an abusive fic where Sehun isn't just an . People always assume the abusers are just mean people, but most are just plainly ill in their mentality. No justification for it, but these kinds or stories with actual love and a twisted state of mind are the ones that make you miserable in that sweet way. I loved it too much for my own good.
Risa04 #3
Chapter 1: Soo love Sehun too much untill he didn't want to live with Sehun anymore
lorna663 #4
Chapter 1: Im crying so much. God, this was so sad. Its so well written and the emotions are so well put. Such a great read. I loved it.
yehet_pcy #5
Chapter 1: ..........
I dont know what i was expecting but i just know i wasnt expecting any of this. Brb crying
Please dont be mad at me when i say this but as a reader i could not relate to sehun and everything je did that hurt kyungsoo was honestly not justifiable even when i found out that he was sick and dying and just wanted everything for kyungsoo. Dont get me wrong though in the end i still had to grit my teeth because i was close to crying.... I couldnt believe the circumstances
This was like legit such a satisfying sequel to such a heartbreaking story. More heartbreak whoopeeeeee :(((((((( i was so selfish the way sehun was at the last scene i wanted soo to tell sehun that he loves him, for one last time-- but that would be asking for too much considering whats happening. Im left with so many what ifs that i dont want answered anymore. Does soo get imprisoned for life, does sehun die in two weeks time, does soo ever find out about sehuns cancer????? im gonna cry.
In the end it was still all about that carnation and how kyungsoo knows what sehun had meant with it in the beginning. Brb let me cry
Sorry for this ugly comment omf ugh im so ugly thank you for writing and sharing this and smile carnations!!!!! Totally a good read
heureucee
#6
Chapter 1: Fudge TT
ctilani #7
This story make me cry.. daebak!!
VitaminFangirl
#8
Chapter 1: Tears pricking my eyes. Read this after Kyungsoo's POV. This series of stories were truly moving. Good job in writing them!
Sehun8gfat
#9
Chapter 1: I'm seriously speechless. This was beautiful but dark. Really dark. Kind of like real life. I liked it so much and I'm so happy I stumbled upon this. This sequel was very much needed. Even with a sad ending, I was satisfied.
Bree_Insanity
#10
Chapter 1: im not crying but my heart?? really hurts??? the other story and this sequel are so good! i usually don't read stories that are first pov, but i'm really glad i kept on reading because these 2 stories were actually really interesting (albeit emotionally painful haha) and beautifully written. i really enjoyed reading them!