Laughter Lines

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You took me to your favourite place on Earth 
to see the tree they cut down ten years from your birth. 
Our fingers traced in circles round its history, 
we brushed our hands right back in time through centuries.

As you held me down, you said:

"I'll see you in the future when we're older
and we are full of stories to be told.
Cross my heart and hope to die,

I'll see you with your laughter lines."

Changes on our hands and on our faces, oh, oh
memories are mapped out by the lines we'll trace.

As you held me down, you said:

"I'll see you in the future when we're older
and we are full of stories to be told.
Cross my heart and hope to die,
I'll see you with your laughter lines."

Ashen faces in cold breeze,
ashen faces in cold breeze,
all the stories you will leave,
all the stories you will leave.

I'll see you in the future when we're older
and we are full of stories to be told.
Cross my heart and hope to die,
I'll see you with your laughter lines.

I'll see you in the future when we're old.
I'll see you in the future when we're old.

 

 

Mark is sure that in three year's time, they'll both be sitting on the age-old remains of a giant. 

Jackson isn't so sure he can take the next three years. 

 

And Mark is swept into the storm of quiet steps and the click of an empty gun and snow splattered with blood. And then Jackson is dragged into the whirlwind, and then it isn't about sitting on that tree stump again with the happiness of decades etched near the eyes. It's about sitting on that stump again, bruised or broken or both.

And then it's about not giving in. 

 

All Mark wants to do is survive, and to keep his mind alive. 

All Jackson wants to do is see Mark again, sitting on that oldened, deadened stump, in shadow or in light. 

Foreword

TRIGGERS for blood, war, torture, depression, guns

also: This is a really long oneshot. Like really really really really really really really really really really really long. Like all my other oneshots put together long. (Not that my other oneshots are long). So, just a warning, it would probably be best if you, the reader/potential reader, set aside a good half hour for this fic. Or find a way to bookmark your place somehow, or keep it open or do something, because it is looonnnngggggggggg. I thought about making it a twoshot but I'm happy about how this story flows now, and since this story wasn't made to be a twoshot, I thought it might lessen the impact or mess up the storyline if I made to chapters. 

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HoneyJune
#1
Chapter 2: You know, I kinda accidentally read the comments down and get the spoiler about how this story will end. I'm not a masochist and to back up that argument, I should've move away from this story. But then I have this gut that telling me "this might be very good. Isn't there a beauty of the saddest?" And I read it.
Because of the spoiler, I've anticipate the worst part, or I thought I am. I still weep when they finally meet, and it just bleed my heart.
So, thank you. I don't know how to say it, my mind is currently electrocuted. Even though I found out about the ending earlier, I'm not regretting the fact I read this entirely.
liquorandice #2
whoo okay i read this a while back and honestly I was jut going through the got7 tag when i passed by this and seriously the mere title gets me so triggered this is one of my favourite got7 fics of all time I'm so rereading hhaha
lulu104 #3
Chapter 2: Wow I'm having so many mixed emotions now. Kudos for writing such a beautiful and painful story.
RinaZar #4
Chapter 2: Idk how many hours it took me to read this but tbh, I was crying the moment Mark entered the army. So imagine me, crying for like 2 hours, on my bed, unable to shout my frustrations because 1. It's 1:46am right now and 2. My room is beside my parents'. My nose is so clogged right now and my whole body is shaking because I still can't stop crying. Even my hands are shaking while I'm typing this and I can't see my keyboard clearly. YOU CHANGED MY LIFE WITH THIS FIC. But I'm so sorry, IN A VERY VERY BAD WAY. You taught me what reality is and it big time. I hated reality and now, I hate it even more. And I hate it that Markson died but I understand why you killed them because duh men. But I hate how you put it so dramatically. Like every line makes my tears flow. Like after a couple of minutes of not reading just to calm myself down, I read again and I cry again. It's just so painful. You let me feel loss because of your fic and I hate you with that because I tend to not be affected in stories or I pretend to or I overrreact but you let me feel emptiness and I'm not even kiddinhg or exaggerating right now. You are a good teacher teaching a very bad lesson. And I hate it because I adore how you wrote this because I can never write this dramatically and I'm so jelly. But really, if you feel that I hate you because of what I previously said (which is a lot of stuff), NO I DON'T. ACTUALLY, HANDS DOWN. YOU DA MAN! I'm your fan now, big time. Thanks for writing this and thanks for making me cry in the middle of the night endlessly. (wow isn't this long)
liquorandice #5
Chapter 2: Okay this took me a little less than two hours to read, cause I like to absorb everything I read. The last scene took me 20 minutes.
Seriously, I don't know how I got myself not to cry through out the story, except the last part. When I got to the last scene, I was basically just quietly letting my tears flow so I wouldn't have to be hassled by my eyesight being blurred or the sound of my sniffling or trying to stop my tears.
It doesn't help that the first thing I listened to in my shuffled playlist after reading this is Jaebum's Forever Love followed by an FT Island song and BigBang's If You...
Honestly, I was trembling while reading this, and my hands are also still slightly trembling while typing this down.
My comment is too long, so I'm gonna continue it in comment replies
Keyvabum #6
Chapter 2: Love makes death more bearable.
When the torture (ps. I hate the slow-killing) started I was already giving up on a happy ending.
I appreciate the retroactive resource you used, because life is a re-signification of both past and present.
Even tho you didn't spare details of Jacks' family.
PD: You owe them a kiss and a chapter. Nah, But I'm glad they were able to confess.
PD2: I hope they were buried together like Abelardo & Eloísa.
Natasha1412
#7
i read this last year and im reading it now and omg this has got to be my all time fav fanficcccc

and omg those lyrics!!! i know this songgg it's bastille's laughter lines right!!! i LOVE this song
jonnexd
#8
Chapter 2: o my god!! this story is so heartbreaking!!! i cried so hard!!!! you are seriously a really good writer!!!!
Bella2298 #9
Chapter 2: Well you have now officially broken my heart! This was just beautiful. Congratulations, you are an amazing writer, you definitely have a wonderful writing style.