Yay! Good job! It was pretty cute.
Uh, I feel awkward because I don't really know what to say since I don't really relate to Seolhyun that much... You know, since I'm actually pretty decent at Math and horrible in dancing; plus, I have zero talents in any sports so that's... Let's just say I'm not athletic, okay? If anything, I'm the I-will-not-go-out-of-my-house-except-for-emergencies type. (Actually, I might relate to Seolhyun's sister more than I relate to the main character herself... >.>)
Anyway, I'll stop myself right now before I ramble on about my entire life...
The story was pretty short. Such a shame because I was enjoying reading it and would've loved a bit more of comedy, but I guess it's perfect the way it is. :-) The length is pretty fine. Yay? Yay!
I loved how you set them up against each other, as competitors, (well, seemingly so) because that's exactly what some education is about, in my opinion. (I say some, because education is really about learning and most actually emphasize that.) Seolhyun really felt inferior to her sister, most especially to Kai, and in that sense, I relate to her. I guess when I see others better than me, they inspire me to push myself to work harder (because, I admit it, I'm a natural shirker and/or lazy bum... XD).
ANYWAY anyway, Kai and Seolhyun are pretty compatible. Kai's not my favorite member out there (actually, let's say it's a certain chubby cheeked, narrow-eyed boy and a certain wide-eyed boy with a heart-shaped smile... ^_~) and Seolhyun isn't either but you make them seem so likable and so normal, I just...WANNASQUISHTHELIFEOUTOFTHEMANDDEMANDTHEYREADBOOKSWITHME. Ehem. Anyway, lovely story, lovely characters and cute ending! ^o^ (OTL I give up. I prolonged the comment only to summarize it in one sentence.) Plus points for the font! Georgia is actually one of my favorites out there... Hope to see you writing more stories! Keep it up! ヾ(＠⌒ー⌒＠)ノ
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