Chapter 4: This has to be one of the best I've read.

This was not what I expected it was so much better! Thank you for sharing!

this is really great!!! i love this fic so much, thank you for writing.

I saw a recommendation for this fic on Tumblr and now I understand why the person recommending this seemed so into the story. This was a really great read! ^^ Would definitely love to read more of this verse.

Chapter 4: this is so interesting and beautiful!!! the idea is so great, i wish this was longer D: amazing work !

Chapter 4: This was definitely an interesting read. ^_^ I really enjoyed the way you set the world up in the beginning with the clear cut lines and 'horror' stories to determine the less human of the realms. Sehun's trepidation about going and his desire to fit in both clicked so very well too. More than any of them, he evidences the human traits that we can really align with and understand. It's fascinating to see him still trying to reconcile himself even after they touch down and though I partially expected it, I find it ironic the healer's son would be the one most in need of healing. lol

It was a well played maneuver to get him and Tao together. I absolutely loved Tao's mentality too; and all the cutting barbs he kept throwing at Sehun in reference to the 'space s'. Bahaha! You did very nicely with his reactions though and I enjoyed seeing the way he too was trying to reconcile the differences between what he'd been told and what he was seeing with Sehun. I totally laughed when he gave Sehun tea though. hehe

Their journey of discovery and truth for each other was very tender and caring and I really enjoyed watching them grow close. The scene with the baby bird was particularly entertaining but also very poignant if only because it's something we take for granted. They're so bloody cute together though. XD

And I'll agree with Frosty that a pissed off Sehun was pretty awesome indeed. Gotta love the way he came to life there with fierce determination at the end. Gyah! So cool! And I'm totally spazzing about his mom too. That was so awesome of her! XD Kudos to you on finishing this up. The last exchange was a bit cheesy but it fits the pair and leaves it open for plenty more in the future if you so desire. Definitely a good read though!

Thank you so much for sharing! ^_^

Chapter 4: Aww it was so sweet. Sehun getting angry is pretty hawt if I do say so myself. I bet he would totally shoot Jongin if he had too LOL.
Ugh I really enjoyed this. I could see it being a kick TV series if it was fleshed out a bit and didn't involve gay romance. but there it is.
I loved it and couldn't be more impressed with this. Thank you soooooooooo much <3
I would love this to be a huge published story. I could spend days reading this universe.
Your the best <3 thank you <3

Chapter 3: AWW so sweet. Sehun is so sweet and Tao is so sweet I just UNF!
It must be so sad to live away from wildlife though. to not know a baby bird and the smell of the earth after it has just rained.
It's sad.
But I adore Tao and I really think he would be like this. AWW, they kissed my TaoHun feels are epic right now. EPIC LEVELS OF FEELS! <3

Chapter 2: Ohhh, so Sehun is a prisoner? Or is it more like sehun was a prisoner while in space and perhaps this is his freedom.
Now I sense an Pocahontas (sp?) theme here...a guy more advanced being rescued by a man who comes from a somewhere more free and wild.
Loving it.
Perhaps Sehun just wants to be free and fit in...he obviously is not an evil person! YAY SEHUN! <3