It wasn't bad for a noob writing. I assure you, it's nowhere near bad.

I admit, I'm curious now. I'll await for progress then.

Poor Gikwang.

I don't know what to feel right now, except im REALLY LOVING THIS STORY. THIS IS GENIUS, especially the amount of emotions put in this. I found myself wanting to punch Junhyung for being such a to Gikwang. I'm really glad I found this fanfic. JUST KEEP ON WRITING THIS IS JUST PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT.

IMMA HIT JUNHYUNG THAT BASTARD<br />
i really cannot understand why would he push kikwang alway if he likes him too ):<br />
poor kikwang ;-;

juns sucha bastard,why is he pushing kiki away if hes inlove with him.ahh thats just depressing.cant wait to see what happens update soon!

ah, this is heartbreaking! I love it!

the only critique I can give is grammer wise.... and even still that could be explained if English isn't your first language. I love this story!

So addictive. I like the way you play with my emotions. This story is brilliant, your writing style - undeniably perfect. I will wait for continuation as long as you ask me to (^~*)

In need of critiques too! Share me what you guys think!

LOL and sorry if the story seems to revolve around alcohol. :))

I'm so fired up in writing right now. Wait... I know what you're thinking, that "What? That crap is the product of his fired-up writing?" or maybe your asking yourself "Am I reading a draft." LOL, Like I said, I'm still quite noob in this. And sorry for always writing settings in High school and story is somehow redundant. LOL, I think I'm still stuck at my first heartbreak last high school :))))