Protecting a Heartbeat

Description

Jongdae has a fear of thunder and lightning to the point of developing anxiety attacks

 

And Luhan takes him in his embrace

 

 

 

 

Even if he, himself,  was lacking his sight, something Luhan needed if he was ever going make Jongdae forget his fear.

Foreword

This is just a oneshot unworthy of posting, but I did so anyway.

 

 

I'm sorry for not being active in writing! I know my subscribers in my other fics are waiting for me, but my life is a messed up as this story right now, so please bear with my abnormal story flow.

 

I promise I'll update, but not right now

 

 

 

Warning:

 

Messed up plot

 

idk where eveything went.

 

 

SnowySpring

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sapphirefrogeggs13 275 streak #1
Chapter 1: This was cute! I love how you also delved into their backstories and how they met, tho certain ways the two of them were described made me a little uneasy. It’s a sweet scenario, all in all.
REDQUEEN07 #2
Chapter 1: I really was liking this at the beginning then you drop this bomb in the end and luhan is blind and my mind is blown and this really good and beautiful. I love chen and his pureness and luhans protectiveness of him which is just sweet deapite everything.
Annasj #3
Chapter 1: Awesome?? awesome!!! How could Luhan be this much great and charming... and how could you just describe Jongdae so beautifully?? T.T

Thankyu so much for this amazing story^^
blublue #4
Chapter 1: Luhan is blind?wow this is awesome
i love the way luhan protected jongdae
lxnelyseoul #5
Chapter 1: oh my god the details the love in this story makes me just dkfjklasdjf
feels this is so lovely i can't even
mikazuki_angel #6
Chapter 1: Like wow... This was really good. Jongdae's character was perfect. I like that this was slightly canon but not really. I don't know if that makes any sense. There's really nothing I can say because this practically left me speechless. LuChen is beautiful. Thank you for writing this.

<3
tR_Junior #7
Chapter 1: Beautiful as its title :')
Forever_ChenChen #8
Chapter 1: THAT WAS SO CUTE! > < LUCHEN BEING ALL SWEET AND CUDDLY. Aww, chen afraid of lightning and thunder storms? (his power is lightning xP) Wanna cuddle him so badly...
zhangdaes #9
Chapter 1: YEA BABY DAT WAS HELLA GOOD YO YO MAN! /hoho what's happening to me yo TT

THIS WAS REALLY GOOD! OEMJEEEE MY FEEEELZZZZZ <3
oh-tea-twelve #10
Chapter 1: They had only became friends in less than four minutes and they're already so intimate xD

This was really goood! i love the jump from the present to the past and back and forth again. usually it's hard to shift from the now to the backflashes (well i think it's hard) so thumbs up author-nim! c:

i really like the way you describe jongdae and his personality

'He conversed with other people like they were rare species, keeping quiet unless his opinions were necessary'

and sobs the scene where luhan sang baby dont cry to jongdae was so precious c: - despite the fact that luhan werent supposed to reveal it yet xD

i love the thing luhan does with jongdae- where he listens to his heartbeat i just think it's so romantic (i never got to listen to someone's heartbeat apart from mine so i usually listen to ticking of my clocks or watches close to my ear- it's really calming so i understand u luhan)

sobs /throws chocos at chu/
thank you! feeeels everywhere!
<3<3<3

'He was going to protect the heartbeat that he held precious to life. Even if Luhan was genetically blind, and he knows that Jongdae’s heartbeat was his only way to see the world in a completely different perspective.' ---> this was really beautifuuul ;u;

so luhan cant actually see right..? it's like he's saying as long as jongdae stays by his side and love him, the world is a beautiful place to live in and there are such things as hope and miracles and that they do exist. and he'll be there for jongdae and would do anything and everything just to keep him safe in his embrace
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