Chapter 11: I wasn't expecting that kind of ending but man this was sooooo good. It never disappointed me. I loved how each side of the storu was presented. The rollercoaster of emotions, i felt them all. Two thumbs up :)
Chapter 11: It's the best short story i ever read. The idea may be common, love triangles, but you write it differently. The character of all casts is so strong, and it end up with rational ending. I can tell who's the best here cause they have their good side and bad side, they have the reason for what they have done so i can blame their action. It's really good story, i feel the mix emotion while read this
Chapter 8: Ah, Yeonri is an excellent character. Her marriage died long ago, yet she continued to cling onto that hatred. I like how she was made to face what the last few years of her life had become. Even though Baekhyun had to die before she could allow herself to see, it was a relief to see her move on from the incident.
I like what you did with this epilogue because it shows that you can't fix the mistakes of the past no matter how unfair they were. You can only find the future. It's a bittersweet type of closure, but a fitting end to this story.
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