Gwenchana, Gwenchana. (One-shot)

Description

Sunhae (You) and Jonghyun are girlfriend and boyfriend. You almost broke up because of Minho, who was jealous of you.

n/a: Well, since I don't have anything else to describe, so... just read until the end if you want to know^^

I always use the name Sunhae for all of my fics^^ I don't know why but i think i'm falling in love with that name lol xDD

Thanks for reading

Foreword

(Author POV)


It was in the beginning of winter....



In the street that you never been there before.



There was a short girl.



She was cheerful.



Pale cheeks.



Big brown eyes.



Brown long hair.



Fair skin.



Innocent personality.








But she was crying.



Crying without someone to wipe her tears away.



Crying without someone to lend her a shoulder.

 


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LOL *I have known that!!! Pabo xDDD*

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parkbeomsshi
#1
thanks unni!! ><<br />
ne! i think so^^ idk why i always make the story looks rushing haha maybe because i am rushing when i write it.<br />
no problem unni^^ you can always criticize me^^ thank you very much for the critic. it really helps! xDDD
SourireDAnge
#2
hahahaha~~~<br />
it was good honey ^^<br />
i just tho't tht the story was moving way too quickly xDDD<br />
she was doing something new in every line xDDD<br />
but thts just me ^^<br />
anyways~<br />
for a beginning it was REALLY good~~~^^<br />
sorry about the critism.....<br />
i do tht ALOT ><<br />
mianhaeeeee
parkbeomsshi
#3
wow hahaha thanks CheriiCake, Tinkerbell, and badlover >w<<br />
yea, when i was writing this story, i was kinda obsessed with the movie Heading to the Ground LOL it was sad and my cheeks were wet because of tears but i wanted to laugh to at same time!! omo~ thanks for reading
badlover
#4
cried a bit at the start and the middle then stopped teary eyes during the end! so funny and cute the ending!
Tinkerbell
#5
I knew my Jjongie wouldn't anyone , he's too awesome ! cute story! ^^
CheriiCake #6
sad at the start, but cute >w<<br />
good job..