Immortality Isn't Enough

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Description

Kyujong gets into a car crash and meets Youngsaeng, who introduces him to the realm of Neverland... or as others know it, purgatory.

 

 

Prequel is >> Empty << , telling Youngsaeng's story before the events of this one.

Sequel is >> Close Enough << , picking up right where this one left off.

Foreword

I had it all, money, success, friends, fame… anything one could want. I know that people say that you can’t have it all, that something is always lacking, but for me it honestly wasn’t. Sure, I hadn’t met the right person yet, but I had a great family, my career was booming, everything was going right… until that night.

 

 

This is roughly/loosely based off of the symbolism of Peter Pan.

Poster made by my amazing sister from another mister, YuYuan. Isn't it just gorgeous???

entered into the Bbuing Bbuing One Shot Contest

Reviewed by Forbidden Dreams Poster & Review Shop

This story has now been translated into Persian by Marikyu90, link > here <

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myotterprince #1
Chapter 1: This is beautiful...
ping501 #2
Chapter 1: I hope I'm not asking too much, I hope you'll write an epilogue for this cause I really find this story of yours beautiful, and you made me cry again.
ping501 #3
Chapter 2: I tried, and it said I write like Stephenie Mayer. I even googled who she is. So she's the write of the famous Twilight. I laughed LOL! I have never written any story in my life. Actually I just wrote something I felt like to someone. I am not a big fan of Twilight. I read New Moon but I didn't finish it, it kinda bored me. I am more of a Harry Potter fan. I just tried, I was curious hehehe!
ss_suju_exo #4
Chapter 1: That was a beautiful yet a sad story!! I hope Youngsaeng wakes up soon..
ShimizuTheShizzShota #5
Chapter 1: Wow...that was...wow, I can't formulate words right now. It's just so beautiful, so ethereal (whatever that means, it sounds right LOL). I...I'm speechless *cries forever*
-Yuan- #6
Chapter 1: Since i read it you of course deserve a comment. It reminded me a bit at my previous hyunseung/nichkhun rpg. So i have a weakness for that this kind of fiction though they never fail to make me sad. I really like that kind of issue about souls it's romantic yet so sad. Therefore I'm excited for the poster to be created and i hope i won't disappoint you >.<

So great little short fiction the only thing i couldn't understand was why did Yongsaeng knew were to lead Kyunjong?
And i just realized while writing that yongsaeng is supposed to be peter pan well thats actually genius >.<
Great idea <3
DGNA_Forever #7
Chapter 1: This story was sad, but touching. Bittersweet with the realization that they might never be together. I loved it, and I also love the KyuSaeng pairing. They are so perfect together.
-Vixxen- #8
Chapter 1: This is amazing. I like that version of Peter Pan. It's really amazing.
Frosty_Maiden #9
Chapter 1: that evoked some really beautiful imagery for me. I love this version of the Peter Pan tale, its interesting to think of it as a coma. I didn't know that before you told me. But I can totally see that actually.
I knew as soon as kyujong woke up and the story mentioned about the other driver being still in a coma that it was going to be Youngsaeng. Just knew it.
Its sad that his life was so awful while Kyujong was so good, yet in order to find each other they had to literally have a car accident.
Beautiful, really well done. I loved this so much!
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