Prologue 1 : The Broken World

Warm Bodies

a/n : slight myunggyu!

"You don't understand,Gyu.. they can't be cured, and once they got you, you'll be eternally sick and the worst thing is that if it infects you more, you'll become a horrific creature like the 'boneys', which are worse than the zombies. We don't know what they are planning out there"


[ Prologue 1 : The Broken World ]

 

"What are you thinking, Myung?" the said man turned his face and smiled immediately as he gestured the other man to sit beside him.

"Just wondering about our future, and this broken world." the other man sighed and leaned in the man's shoulder. Then he gave him a reassuring squeeze on the man's arm. 

"The huge protection wall surrounding us, and the entire apocalypse out there… I don't think we have something to do aside from waiting for the government to destroy the wall and let the death come."

"Yah, cut the crap. Don't be so hopeless, If there's a will, there's a way."

"You don't understand,Gyu.. they can't be cured, and once they got you, you'll be eternally sick and the worst thing is that if it infects you more, you'll become a horrific creature like the 'boneys', which are worse than the zombies. We don't know what they are planning out there."

"Uh-uh, but sitting and waiting for the deaths are not the best way to spend your life here. Our fathers are trying to solve it and defend our future" 

Hearing those words, Myungsoo couldn't hide his smile and ruffled his boyfriend's hair "Aigoo, my Gyu is the best!!"

"And for your information, you still have your parents untouched, unlike me. My mother is nowhere to be seen. Maybe she became one of them or maybe she is dead... so, don't you dare lose hope!" said Sunggyu as he flicked Myungsoo's forehead, which Myungsoo responded to with his sheepish grin. "I'm sorry about your mother." 

"Nah, it's okay.." and they cuddled, giving each other warmth.

 

Yeah, this is our broken world. All this chaos begun when those stupid scientists failed with their so called-superior DNA experiment. In fact the failure brought us nightmare, it infects the human and spread very quickly, when the infection has reaches your heart, you will become a skinny skeleton-like monster and will eat any creatures. People didn’t know what to do so they decided to quickly build a huge wall from all kind of steel to protect us. Everybody in the world has been infected and left our country to be the only one survived. 

WB


a/n : woohoo prologue 1 finished!

I planned to split the prologue in 2 parts because yea.. there're different.

and this hasn't even reached the main story, would you give your opinion?

thank you for reading!

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IN LESS THAN A DAY IS OUR HAMSTER BIRTHDAY!!!!

why is he so cute!! >,<

 

 

 

 

(why is he so cute!! >,<)

 

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crepusculo #1
Chapter 1: hi please updatee
marshimaru #2
Chapter 2: heyyy new subbie here~ i wonder when will u update this story..? I WANNA KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT *^* i like this<33 so update juseyooooo :3
WorldTurnsCold #3
Chapter 5: Hello! I was just missing your update and I happened to just read your note. I don't think you plagiarised the story (well at least myungsoo's character isn't totally the same) I guess there are similar parts. But, I still think it's alright. If you're afraid, you can twist and change the storyline/plot. (Add in some characters and scenes) you don't have to give up on this fic. You can always make it different in the end! So, I'm waiting for your next update. I will support your fic like how you supported mine. <3<3<3
gyusunggyu #4
Update please! *^* This is so good <3
aquakittie
#5
Chapter 5: Also... if you like and I don't mean to try promoting my own stuff, but it just came to me a few minutes are I posted the last comment... I have a story out... it was 'inspired' by the Korean drama coffee prince... Now if you seen it, then I think reading it would benefit you as you can see the difference between the 'original' and the 'inspired' one.

Now it is just a thought... you DONT have to do this... just thought it would help... XD FIGHTING!!!
aquakittie
#6
Chapter 4: *sigh*... I thought I could reassure you... but really all you did was change their names... also make Myungsoo more likeable then the original character... (Which I have to say made me a little upset since I don't like the zombie and human now, cuz in the movie the guy wasn't likeble, so it made it okay to deal with his death, rooting for the unnatural couple, but this makes me sad and mad. you ate his boyfriend and you think you can have him type thing... that was something you should have kept the same.)

Okay the other parts... I mean you got it down to the 'T', It was like I was watching the movie instead or reading a different piece.

There is nothing wrong with being inspired by a movie, and you can use things from a movie, but as long as it's not word for word. this is something that you unfortunately did, you did it so well I failed to see were 'YOU' came in.

So in my honest opinion... yes you did plagiarize, even though you probably didn't mean too... it would be best if you stopped and took down this story BEFORE you get into trouble. If you are not sure what plagiarizing is, there is a FAQ in this website you can go to... and it will tell you the difference.

I am sorry, I really did want to help prove that it wasn't but... in my opinion It is. D:

If you really want to make a woogyu or whatever you wanted to do then just make up your own story, not inspired by movies, and make your own zombie... romance fic.

I am really sorry about this... I hope you will get to write again, but maybe your own work this time... XD FIGHITING!!
aquakittie
#7
Chapter 1: Well I wasn't going to read this... but then my caught your please read sign... and you know what... I have seen warm bodies... and I will tell you if I think it is plagiarism or not okay?

So just give me a little time, and I will tell you if I think it is plagiarism.
onlyforone
#8
Chapter 5: huh? i haven't watch Warm Bodies tbh, but if you feel like your fic is totally the same as the movie, from the storyline to every words stored there, then yes, it's plagiarism

if you only inspired by the movie, i don't see a problem..