Chapter 1: oh wow! when you warned about cheese-factor, i didn't expect this! i don't think this is cheesey in the usual fluff way ...it's more like...there's no angst, there's no fighting, hurting etc...just love (though they are talking about stories of angst etc, funny enough). wookay is a weakness of mine, and it was nice to see wooyoung shut jun up a few times since he's always so loquacious.
a simple story written in less simple language sometimes fares better than a complicated story written in simple language. *thumbs up*

I'm a fan of yours in LJ, but dont comment much. I'm personally a fan of how you portrait Wookay, though is an OTP i'm not usually crazy about, ever since your "the sweetest thing" my mind was completely changed. And you are one of the few people that can make me read chanho in different fics and not get tired of it. Everything from your writing style, your extensive vocabulary, the references you add to your fics every so often, the way you describe the boys and their different personalities, everything is just perfect.

Now i'm sure some may find your fics hard to read for the exact same reasons that i love them, since people seem to enjoy simpler writing, but i hope you continue on sharing your amazing work with us. Gems like you are rare to find. ^^
P.s. I'm panda_su on LJ so if you ever see the name you know who it is ^^

Chapter 1: Mow, I did some searches on Eric Clapton songs in here..the songs are good and very old for me..hehee

and I think I've seen the book A thousand splendid Suns in one of the bookstore here, from the summary of it, it sounds pretty interesting piece to read..maybe I'll buy it the next time I saw the book :D

aren't I a good reader? LOL

Chapter 1: tbh I think this fic is a bit heavy for me to read..the words I mean *don't take it to your heart okay* I still love it ^^

I think I have seen a Malay movie of Layla Majnun before.. 'twas like ten years back when I was still in primary school..but the movie is a very old one hence the black n white pictures..kkk

maybe those characters are from that movie..iuno, but yeah the names fit ^^

oh, gawd just how cheeeeesy these two can be..kkk like those simple messages they send to each other > w < so damn cute!

mmkay, I admit..I was just looking foward of them kissing! LOL haha..can't help it..wookay babies are just too cute all cudly on bed on top of each other and talking bout love stories :3333

oh gaaaaawd! I just can't really explain the thrill of reading them together.. I know many dont find them awkward, but I just love this two hyung-dongsaeng as lovers..kkk I find them attractive in their on ways..

urghhhhh...just kiss him senseless many times Minjun and Woobaby gonna act all whiny and cute cuz he can't finishes his story...kkk


Thank You Mow!!! WooKay is Just LOVELYYYYYY♡♡♡♡♡

OMG MOW!!!!
WOOKAY BABIES IN THE HOUSE!
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