Chapter 1: ooh! i'm glad you passed by with a comment on one of my stories, because otherwise i may not have found your writing! it's unusual and makes it stand out from most of the usual AFF style oppa-i-love-you stories. good job!
Chapter 1: To be honest I came here because of the title, I always like good titles and flowers.
Then I read it, your midnight writing.
It's not bad, your story telling ability is good. I like the scene with them in the lake surrounded by water lilies.
But I had hoped she would still be alive because she was telling the story. :(
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