Coin Laundry

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“You became the reason I breath, only to suffocate me.

The sound of the washing machine rumbling, the smell of recently washed clothes with detergent and cheap coffee lingers at the back of his mind. Have you ever fell in love so hard that when you said good-bye, a part of you died? He wanted to avoid that, he wanted to turn back time and change everything that he could. He wanted to return to the time where they never loved each other. He wanted to return to the time where they never knew each other, the day where he was supposed to be somewhere else than at the coin laundry store.

Foreword

this is an entry to ✎ oxymorons: a writing contest, prompt used; 10. "You became the reason I breath, only to suffocate me." - Tablo, Epik High.

this shall be written in taemin's p.o.v since i'm a dude.

jacesparks final remarks:

hey guys, due to unfortunate events, i am not able to write this story so instead, i pass this on to euforia, my cous. she's an amazing writer, i trust her. there might be changes in the way how she plans to write it so i hope you aren't disheartened by it. it isn't that far off from the original idea, so don't worry. and again, i am sorry and i thank you for being patient.

euforia's note: hello new, uh, friends or readers or wtv. i'm lana the weirdo and will take over this story now. and i am not a dude, but i will still write it in min's pov. i got my own ideas on this piece when jace told me bout this so i hope you bear with slight changes.

this story is a work of fiction, characters used are not mine and this has nothing to do with the living or the dead.

this story is jacesparks's original creation that was transferred to euforia.

thanks for reading!

graphics provided are credited to lackadaisical designs.

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myria71 #1
Chapter 1: As expected its a sad starting but still nice and sweet to read from Taemin's POV how she remembers her (I assumed that Naeun had passed away).

Wl look forward for yr next update author-nim.
Stepfanietaeun #2
Chapter 1: Where's naeun? Did she die? So what happen.......
mimiput #3
Chapter 1: Where's naeun? Did she die? Or just left? I'm curious, update soon juseyo author-nim
mimiput #4
Chapter 1: Where's naeun? Did she die? Or just left? I'm curious, update soon juseyo author-nim
leenaeun
#5
Chapter 1: It's so saadd, but beautiful at the same times, good work ^^
myria71 #6
I foreseen that this wl be a sad story.....
Anyhow I'm looking forward to yr next update.