Decreasing Time

Description

In a society where you can literally look down at your wrist and know exactly how many years, or minutes you have left to live. It leads to Chorong being fearful of everything, after all she knew what would happen if she let her self slip up. 

Chorong lives through other people, which gives her the fears she has. She recalls all the people she knew, and their lives in great clairty. 

How will Chorong get over her fear, and actually start living? 

(to those reading for Naliz, They have a semi big part... as you guess it Chorong's friends!)

 

 

Well i'm not exactly good at explaining things, but i hope i did a good job. One of my readers had asked for another story, so hear it is. 

-undercovermusic.

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ckaz99
#1
Chapter 17: noooo here we ended aha~ this is a really exciting story!! with the themes, I wondered how it would make Chorong so paranoid, but now reading through and understanding her trauma and the system, it all makes sense. Bomi too! This was really great to read and painted a world that felt like it could've been grey but in fact had colour, and love, and living! would've been so curious to see how they might get out of this, and how Bomi could make it up to them. thank you for writing this!
Gr33nPow3r #2
Chapter 17: Interesting story hope u havent given up on it :)
Choheri #3
Chapter 17: Really great plot author nim...update soon <3 hope to see morw chomi moments :)
swifter
#4
Chapter 17: Yeahh!! Lets get it on!!
cookienomster
#5
Chapter 16: Who shot Bomi?! I'll fite him/her myself >:(
Thanks for updating
swifter
#6
Chapter 15: What noww!!?? Cant wait!!
trollmaster
#7
Chapter 14: ohhhh
mwafiq
#8
Chapter 12: update please
usedtobeslrd
#9
Chapter 12: Waiting for update~
rainbowfluff
#10
Chapter 13: Yay cant wait!