Chapter 1: i foresee myself reading this again a couple of times in the future... really well-written despite the lack of dialogue. sungyeol's thoughts and emotions were portrayed so beautifully i just cant o<-< it'd be great to know what's going on in myungsoo's head as well but nevertheless. awesome job!! thank you for writing this ♡
Chapter 1: I love how well this story was written! You did not need to have dialogue in this story. The way it was written was amazing and I love how with the way it was written you would not need dialogue. You portrayed how Sungyeol felt towards Myungsoo very well.
Chapter 1: That was really beautiful ~
I feel like it wouldn't be as beautiful as it is if there was any dialogue in it.
I love your writing style, by the way. It's ... I don't know how to explain it, but it's absolutely amazing to me :D
The story was great too. SungYeol only feeling complete with MyungSoo, whom he hated first. Opposite attracts, I guess ^^
Is it wrong to think it was kinda cute ? :D
Your writing style is very amusing, to be honest. And i love how you use your words too, i ended up reading your story by accident but it mesmerized me. Good job you did there, although i do think its sorta kind of a word vomit, xx
Chapter 1: Scrolling and scrolling without any dialogue. Some may thought it would be better if there was any. But then it wouldn't be the same as the outcome now. Very well written that it scared the hell out of me. The hair at the back of my neck, I can feel them warm. You did an excellent job with this story. I'm glad that gabdong recommended this story to me. This is worth reading over and over again because it is so beautiful. Beautiful how they loved each others wings despite the difference. You did a really great job author-nim!
Chapter 1: I really loved this! Yoru writing style is perfect, storyline was perfect and ... Everything was just perfect to be honest. /flails
/whispers, maybe you should write a part two somehow..... with *-* *bricked*
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