Chapter 1: I like the idea of this oneshot. I hope Seunghyun is not gonna have a trauma lol. Thanks for writing.

Honestly, I'm not one to read fics and I don't read fics in general but your title caught my attention; A Guy Walks into A Bar. You know, the hiccup story thing. So I scanned through your story and I have to say I love your style of writing. I'm a glutton for beautiful writing^^ And yes, this is actually my first time commenting.^^ Anyway, I do write rated scene but I always find it the hardest to do so I do understand how you feel about writing the would-be-best-part and I respect your limits. Have a nice day and keep up the good work^^