Underneath Valentino Stars

Description

winter dawn and late night french kissing 

Foreword

 

 

a short oneshot/drabble oh dear goodness what the hell did I write oh well I can't seem to write with a plot at all *sigh*

 

 

 

forever inspired by this http://harues.livejournal.com/9815.html

 

 

and aren't these two songs super pretty :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rXeO5VCxm1w

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wqBzrE9Dn2U

 

title inspired from this song  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BGubcH8eGPM

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-anglestory180
#1
this was the drabble that i read! such wonderful imagery and smooth prose :) (i'm p_swizzle on livejournal btw)
Krystalocked
#2
Chapter 1: Too beautiful ;_; And somehow so magical, so dreamy~
Your vocabulary is too beautiful, all these flowery fruity words~<3
"She is his wanderlust Lolita eyes of starlight and wonder."
falliblefantasy
#3
Chapter 1: I've finally had time to read this!!
OMG why do you think I won't like this! All the description and imagery just spins this really beautiful picture out of it all and gosh purple prose is so your thing <3 I can't even come anywhere close to such pretty description, like how do you think of all these words to put together~ let me just admire your writing :')
no-izu
#4
Forever crying for this beautiful piece of art ;_;
Seriously I really love that every word has its beauty and how you portrait the scenery, the feelings inside--well basically everything in this story is just beautiful.
Thank's God I've found this fanfiction because it's really make my day :')
kamanaa
#5
Chapter 1: HOW DO YOU DO THIS PERFECTION?!

I absolutely adore your writing. This is the most beautiful thing I've read in forever.
eseech
#6
Chapter 1: HELLO YES I FINISHED READING \o/

ahh; you do purple prose so well sometimes I cry because IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL. I completely agree with everyone; the language and imagery is super super pretty and literally nothing can convince me otherwise. Urgh your prose is literally beautiful and how your writing is just a burst of sensations (love love love the image you present but you know already) makes it really, really pretty. The whole thing reminds me of something from Lana Del Rey (no surprise there since music <33) and dynamics between Myungsoo and Suzy is super, super, super pretty. I'M SORRY I KEEP USING WORDS LIKE BEAUTIFUL AND PRETTY BUT THIS IS LITERALLY HOW YOUR WRITING COMES OFF AS <333 Definitely beautiful purple prose, and really, really beautiful stuff ;;A;; I don't know why, but I can really see this as something Myungzy would do! (Even if it's out of their usual pairing conventions)

Urgh seriously though your descriptions are so, so, so beautiful HOW DID YOU CREATE SOMETHING AS BEAUTIFUL AS THIS JUST ASKJDASKJASHKJSHKJ

my reference and goal for purple prose tbh <3
farabigail #7
Chapter 1: This is really beautiful, and the words you choose, wwaaaah im in love with your writing skill.
But because english is not my first language, i dont really understand the meaning :"
gudaeshipper
#8
I don't know what to say this is so beautiful. I just fell in love with your writing.
-iliner
#9
Chapter 1: So pretty oh god ;; <#
blissful
#10
Chapter 1: oH the PRETTY it kills me <3
you really have a way with capturing a single moment and making it sound
so enthralling and i want to steal all your adjectives and keep in a little
glass jar

my favorite verses are these
"There nights (underneath valentine stars) revolved around late night French kissing, midnight skinny dipping and lost car ride adventures to nowhere, runaway rebels (cold beer for him and trashy dragonfruit schnapps for her) poetry for their ed up blue prose, language souls and purple prose to calm their minds with ghost words and pretty things, after all pretty lies to them was everything."

and i like this too "He pushed her countless times off the cliff (that’s what she always wanted)"

whycan'tijusthaveeverything