Chapter 9: Joon, I just love the way you reacted! The back-hug-thingy <3 Whisper in the ear <3
I really needed some fluff. It's a cliché, but it's a good one :P
This time you really surprised me. Lydia's transformation was well excelled in this chapter. It was realistic and lovely. It felt like her heart had truly decided to keep holding on to Joon, despite starting everything on the wrong note :P
I'm kind of worried about their future, What if he finds out about the bet? What if ex. G.O hear the girls talk about it and then he ends up blabbing about it to Joon? D:
Also, does the girls genuiely want Lyd to sleep with Joon and complete that quest, now that they are equally in love? O.o
I WANT MORE! xD

Chapter 8: What can I say? YOU ROCK GIRL!
I can feel how much you must have been struggling with this chapter and when we look at the reason; it's no surprise really.
I can sort of guess why you must have had a hard time with Thunder and he does seem a bit transparent even though he plays a big part. Don't be afraid to show more of his colors and just let him do whatever you feel would be helpful for the story. ;) (everyone has wild and unexpected side to them)
As for the POV from Joon, it was one of the 2 first chapters that came into mind; what was his first impression of Lydia? :P
The overall idea of this chapter was good enough so don't feel bad about that! But I also think that you should take your time with the next one :) Don't stress over it when you have your exams (I also get a so called writer-blockade some times) because if you rush it then you will just feel sad about your work when it's supposed to be fun ;)
I won't leave you! So keep your spirits up and just smile. Love you <3

Chapter 7: I am squealing so darn hard for no reason!
Wait maybe it's because of me recalling scenes from cap dong while you mentioned it. Or was it Thunder's fault?
This is probably going to be a bit short on feedback because it was written right the same way as I would normally do. (Maybe I should try writing an angst short story?)
It felt blurry when imagining Lyd sitting curled op in her room and just thinking back on the event. It was easy to feel her frustration. "So she is aware of her responsibilities" is what I thought. When something catches my attention for good then my face gets completely stiff and serious and it's proof that it was a good turn of events... at least to me xD
Joon being all full of himself and jumping to conclusions, matches the description of him really well. I once read his comment from an interview where he is the "all or nothing" type that believes that closed heart cannot be reopened. That made me even more worried about how the hell they would avoid such a tragedy and thus leaving me sqealing for several reasons (not just thunder ♡)
I will be looking forward to next chapter :D Fighting!

Chapter 6: After reading it!
Uh~ I'm happy to see the way she handles the situation with Joon. Coming to accept how she feels and yet still stepping around with careful steps while staying true to her own nature. As for Joon; he's completely fooled by her "play" no matter how you turn the table (Not surprising really with his all-muscle-no-brains personality) haha!
I noticed a rare deep personality understanding when she disclosed her personal needs in terms of being the strong one and thus felt cherished by the small gestures rather than the clinging ones. That was a dead give away of who she really is and why she seems as such a good match with Joon, even if she didn't really liked him in the beginning.

As for the person filled with wisdom I would chose Thunder. He is an introvert IRL and would be one of the best to observe situations more than the others, so if Joon really wanted to seek help for something I could imagine Thunder giving him a lecture or two ;)

Before reading the new chapter!
- Uhh~~ I'm really excited right now! Better start reading! x3

Chapter 5: YAY! New chapter! Ok listen, you might not like this chapter due to the lack of content maybe? But no worries :) The intention and scenery (mentally) was more than filling enough for me to picture myself in her place (NO KIDDING!)
I have always know Joon to be lacking in brains so this innocent side of him where he sometimes "dares" to take another step is really good, because it creates "unexpected" emotions and situations for me as a reader. As much as I like the fact that she is keeping her distance, she still gives in too quickly :P I would love that moment where she's locked in a corner in between her emotions and her sanity thus making Joon reaching out for her if he really cares about her.
As you might can feel through my detailed explanation I also have been writing a lot, but I had to quit it quickly due to personal reasons :) So I want to provide you with all my know-hows in my feedback to your story since I sincerely like it from the bottom of my heart (^-^)/