Chapter 1: Wow... this was really good, I wish it was longer. Was there a full story of this? Hehehe... Thank you for writing and sharing this drabble. ^-^
Chapter 1: "The world was in chaos. And Chanyeol and Jongin somewhere in the middle of it all."
I loved that phrase; it was immensely powerful, for real! I had goosebumps after reading it, it just described everything Chanyeol must be feeling in just a few words: despair and fear and worry...
The whole drabble was really good; if this is your first attempt at writing, I can't wait for what will come next (actually, while I know that this is a drabble and that it is completed, I really hope to see more of it ^^).
I really want Chanyeol to find Jongin... :( If you ever feel like writing what happens next, I'll know, for I subscribed, but even if you don't, thank you for writing this, it was really good :) Can't wait to see more of you as a writer in the future!
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