206 Miles

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You...   

...Me

 

Along this 206 miles.

 

 

 

 

"There is always this one person whom I like and care so much since times ago, no matter how much I've tried, I just do."

"And that person is..... you. It's just you. And always you."

 

 

❈ beyond fiction ; an EXO writing contest ❈ 

 

- An Entry for Beyond Fiction -
Title: 206 Miles
Characters: Luhan, Jia (OC) 
Genre: Romance, Angst - Straight fiction
Submitted on: March 17, 2014 - Entry #22

Foreword

 

This is my first ever one-shot. I dare myself to join the competition held by one of my favorite authors: xoxoayonimous. ^^

Hope this would turn out good. Wish me luck! xoxo

*Subscribe and upvote are accepted. (Heck, it’s way more than accepted. Of course, I’d LOVE it!)

**And, please do comment! I need some reviews, consider this is my first oneshot and submitted for contest ㅋㅋㅋ but don't be too harsh, kay? ;) I swear I'll gladly receive them all!

 

 

Love,

Shazalleys ♥

 

 

 

 

© Copyright 2014 Shazalleys 

 

 

credits:

Big thanks to -LovingU- from ❝ℰɴᴄʜᴀɴᴛᴇᴅ ℘ᴏsᴛᴇʀsʜᴏᴘ❞ for the beautiful poster! ♥♥♥

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Author's Thoughts
shazalleys
Now I know how the great authors out there warn to not copy anything from their story. So, this is how it feels~ :"
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vanhamdo #1
Chapter 2: So touchin' ;__;
Haengbog #2
Your review is complete.
baeeeya #3
Chapter 2: Shaz unni, that was great! :D Why don't you believe in yourself? You should write more! I so encourage it! I hope you can win something from the contest as well. About the story, I noticed that it was very detailed like setting and stuff which I lack in my stories. And the suspense of knowing what was there past made me eager to continue reading. Honestly, this was good unni! :D I hope you feel confident now and continue to write! xoxo
Baozi_baekhyun #4
When does the story start ^^
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