But You Didn't

Description

Tao thought that his lover would stay, but she didn’t. Tao thought his love life would last the longest with her, but it didn’t.

 

 

“You told me that you were coming back home, but you didn’t.”

 


A story of a clumsy, dorky guy named Tao who practically created endless mess which would only trouble him later. He even tagged his best friend, Rhen along. Despite his clumsy attitude, Rhen found him loveable.

 

Almost everything that he does would build ire and annoyance to anyone, but not Rhen.

 

And from a simple friendship, something more affectionate grew of their relationship as time passed by.


- An Entry for Beyond Fiction Writing Contest –

Title: But You Didn’t

Submitted by: kroncubine

Submitted on: 16.03.2014

Foreword

Tao took a quick glance at his watch. It’s finally 12.41 a.m. in the early morning. Realising that it was already the exact time when he last saw her, he lighted the third candle and sang her favourite oldie by Richard Marx entitled Right Here Waiting.

 

“Wherever you go,

Whatever you do,

I will be right here waiting for you.”


 

 

[A/N]: Not every love story ends up beautifully. This is what I thought. And so, I put this quote as the main plot in almost all of my angst stories. This time, it’s another one featuring Tao. It’s my first time in using him as the main male character.

 

P.s: I in foreword + description, I’m sorry T.T

 

{{ Credits to Kairos Graphics and designer: ChannieH for the amazing poster and background!}}

 

{{credits to Enticement's Advertisement Shop for the advertising}}


reviews from : 

kroncubine
i am so unpopular

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
SyrineKarouiAngel
#1
WHY IS THIS STILL NOT FEATURED???? T.T PEOPLE NEED TO READ THIS. IT REMAINS 1 OF MY FAVORITE FFS EVER! ♥
hisbrokenvow
#2
Chapter 1: A slow yet wonderful story. I really love how you ended it. <3
YumiArt #3
Chapter 1: This is one amazing story I'd ever read. Good job!
blackunicorns
#4
Chapter 1: this story was just beautiful& amazing :). I like how you describe the characters. It was just too beautiful to read. I'm so speechless..♥
SyrineKarouiAngel
#5
OMG THIS ONESHOT IS JUST BREATHTAKING! I would have cried if I weren't in the university spending the whole morning reading this instead of studying...
your way of writing is just so touching!
ooPanda
#6
Chapter 1: crey........ i can't say another word than this....
yetothehet #7
Chapter 1: oh my this story is beauuuutiful!!! i lovee it. job well done my friend :D
kimhanee
#8
Chapter 1: Aww,so sweet(?) ,, i hope my future husband is a loyal person *is this kind of person still exist?*,,yes,just like me *hehe praise
myself*,,hwaiting 4 more stowy ^^
missripley
#9
Chapter 1: ;A; beautiful ~~~~~~~
Imma kerayyiiingg ;A;
ZakhirahMeyh #10
Chapter 1: wow, I LOVE IT! :')