Chapter 1: I honestly think a second chapter from someone else's point of view would be a great idea. It could give us a lot of insight into what was actually going on before Chanyeol got brought to the hospital, WHY he was brought there, and how he started to heal. This chapter is really creepy in a great way, but it's also vague on what's really going on because Chanyeol isn't aware of what's happening around him. I'd love another chapter explaining at least some things, even if it's just the members being like 'sooo...we thought it was okay for Yeol to be smiling like that all the time but it's starting to freak me out and he's been acting weirder and weirder, someone should do something'. Also I really really want to know what was up with that blood on the couch?? So yeah, please by all means write another chapter! It could definitely add to what's already here instead of taking away from it.
Chapter 1: I love reading psychological thrillers. The changes of mentality is always fascinating. Pity there's not many fics here. But yours will always be a favourite of mine. Thank you for writing this story.
This is so twisted (in a really good way though). I had like an existential crisis after reading this and ended up thinking about the meaning of life...
Chapter 1: As much as I liked this story, it still confused me. It came across as ALL of it being one bad dream. I thought he was eventually going to wake up from it. It seemed like he had some Sadist tendencies and they came out more forcefully in his dreams. So, the ending confused me. It was well written, though. I loved all the details. I say 'Yes' to a second chapter. I'd like to read more. Good job and good luck.
Chapter 1: whoa... it was pretty scary to read the parts about what Chanyeol was thinking about, yet it was so intriguing at the same time. I'm so glad it's a happy ending though~
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