[ONESHOT] Dance

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I’m going to post this because it’s really long and I worked on it for a long time. I’m going to label it as a one shot until my inspiration for it comes back but enjoy this nonetheless.

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Izandinosaur
#1
Chapter 1: this story is too good to be a oneshot!!! we want more!
miko12 #2
Chapter 1: I'd like to see a Lay vs. Kai for her in this, hope you continue
sooyeon-ie
#3
Chapter 1: This is so much fun! I haven't been hanging around AFF lately but this just caught my attention. :))

Too bad it's a one shot. It's really good.
foureightone
#4
And I'll have you know that I haven't commented on a fic in over a year, almost two. That's another reason you can't leave this as a oneshot. Anything that can bring me out of hiding here must go on lol.
foureightone
#5
Nope. You're not allowed to mark this as a oneshot. No ma'am. This was too awesome. I'd love to see how her relationship develops with Kai and Lay, such polar opposites.
mofoemari
#6
Really liked the concept of the story. Hope you can continue! And the part where it said "Do you know my ," just made me crack up so hard....maybe a little bit too hard. Haha.
nerdscandy #7
Chapter 1: Wahh I really like thissss :) Please continue, really. It's so... real... like it's not all fluff, but it has just the right amount of happiness :)