Chapter 12 *Bonus*

Bedtime My Bangtan Babies
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  So, because I've been getting such little comments... anyone who comments before I update once again will get a sneak peek on the next chapter before anyone else does. I love you guys, but I would enjoy more comments about what you think about my story and what I could improve. <333333 Please COMMENT, Subscribe & Upvote <333:D

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                Jin woke up one morning and gasped as he noticed that he was late for work. He had only been late a few times before, but that also meant less pay. He couldn’t afford a short pay check with the house, water bill and electric bill on the line. He quickly got dress and fixed up his hair as best as he could to at least look presentable.

                He took one last look in the mirror before running off to his children’s rooms to make sure they were getting up. He frantically woke picked out all of their clothes and woke them up to start getting ready. He sighed frustrated and tried to make breakfast as fast as he possibly could. He didn’t know how he managed to get through these types of mornings, but he did.

                Finally, he had gotten all of his children breakfast and laid it all out on the table. He was happy to see all his children except Jungkook in the kitchen and ready to eat. He smiled before running off to go get Jungkook ready for the day. Though, when Jin entered his room and saw him… he was starting to get concerned.

                He was confused as Jungkook awoken and was screaming. Jin didn’t understand what was wrong, but quickly took Jungkook in his arms and kissed his forehead sweetly. “Oh my gosh” Jin whispered to himself as he looked at Jungkook and felt his forehead. Jungkook’s forehead was on fire and Jin knew right away that he was sick.

                He ran his fingers through his hair and knew that he wouldn’t be able to take the day off. Finally, after thinking about it for a while, he realized that there might be someone willing to watch Jungkook while he was at work. Jin quickly got his cell phone and called the one person he knew would never let him down.

                “Hey P-Goon listen Jungkook his sick, I need to go to work and I was wondering if you could watch him for me” Jin said softly. He smiled in relief when P-Goon answered the he would be there in 5 minutes or so. He felt like luck was somewhat on his side today and now all he had to worry about was the rest of his kids getting to school.

                He smiled as all the kids were finishing up their breakfast and not making a huge fuss this morning. “Come on guys, get you

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6/12/14 So Chapter 20 will be the finally chapter! I will be posting the chapter at least by Sunday :D

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Jie123 #1
I love this so much *cries* the feels...they just keep coming X(
If I were there I would punch anybody that separates bangtan Anybody I say anybody!! (Good job by the way)
namjinkookbts
#2
Chapter 12: ㅠㅠ Why am I crying? This is so sad.
jamlesschim #3
Chapter 21: I feel so happy about P-Goon and Jin being together and hes proposing!!! I'm super pissed at kidoh becuas he's a huge . How dare he call himself the father of the kids. And
But like P-Goon is my bias in toppdogg along with Hansol so I'm happy.
jamlesschim #4
Chapter 12: Awww. Kookie called P-Goon daddy. :")
Boy, it doesn't matter if you're not blood related. A dad or even mom is a mom and dad when they support and love their children. You've done all of that. You have the right to be called dad by every single one of them.
Btw author-nim, I love this story. Its really good. The story line is great and I really love the characters even if I get mad at Kidoh because he's kind of inconsiderate. But nevertheless I love the story. Because you wanted constructive criticism. I will tell you that you're wording as in the order you out words in is a bit off. Like for example (you didn't do this but its an example) you'd put "he ready was (again its an example, not a very good one but...) When it's supposed to be he was ready. Other than that you're story is great. Its not such a big thing since I can understand it perrfectly anyway. :)
springjasmine91
#5
Chapter 20: in the right of law the father does not have the right to take custody of the children so kidoh did a move by taking the three olders kids... jerk... oh p-goon sweetie. Fighting for the next chapter
NashaDaBest #6
Chapter 12: Awwwwww~ Jungkook called P-Goon "daddy"! How cute~
Yoshi875
#7
Chapter 21: YAYYY, THANK YOU, you really left me on an annoying cliffhanger so this is awesome ;D
KpopLuver404
#8
Chapter 21: YASSSSS!!!! You just made me sooo~ happy right now, because I really wanted to know what was gonna happen to Kidoh, suga, rapmonnie and j-hope.
seoulsunshine
#9
Chapter 21: yes o need someone to beat kidoh for me...
How dare he leave jin like that =...=
seoulsunshine
#10
Chapter 20: I hate kidoh for real you will not get any kfc for months
Irony huh he took all the rap line with him and leave the vocal line with pgoon ~~
This is cool .. I love you so much author-nim for this amazing story

Ps-I heard pgoon trying date with the lady 'bling-joo'